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Tyler The creator presets

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Today marks 10 years ago that I joined the site

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metaldan online in the past 15 minutes :dog:

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I got locked out my discord account rip love yall :earl: :ronan: :tony:

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My account is almost 10 years old wtf.

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Anyways I think the albums pretty good definitively not better then igor or flower boy

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I guess im the first person to talk about (call me if you get lost) But that album was pretty good

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Fucking randomly came into my head today

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Good times

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Remember that dude that faked a whole bunch of art photos and got found out

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bro clockin in after so long, so much time has passed fr fr

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fig thats bad ok that represents the devil please post

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crazy how i can never post again since i have 6,066 posts

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im gonna start checking in daily ok. i see 50 members online in the last 15 minutes. No reason this place isnt lit

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Has anyone seen the new Tyler billboard he put up for his new album ¨Call me if you get lost¨ Hopefully thats the intro for his new album

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vzsQWd2YWkw

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i came on here and searched around today and its crazy that i remember everyones names. seriously idk if yall will remember me but i remember a lot of you. sm123 i still follow you on instagram

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hey guys

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iowemillions

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Does anyboody remember that video of the one black kid dressed just like tyler running around and dancing at a skate park?

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@Jack haha

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wow i joined on the same day as tony

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i didnt pay for it though

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@chrisb access to premium threads

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This place been dead for years

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miss this shit, id come on here after school everyday.....

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Happy 10 for Yonkers.

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happy 10 year anniversary to yonkers

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hi

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i've been going through old threads and it's bringing me back, this place was such a huge part of my life, so weird and sad to see it like this now..

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ugk :(

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4eva

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rip ugk

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yo

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holy shit hi everyone, it's so dead here now

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idk wtf I'm doing bruh

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holy shit people still use this? lol

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Feel free to PM me if you have any further questions or concerns about the Golf hoodie

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I am a 5"10 150lb male btw

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I'm not sure about the Golf hoodie sizing, but for Gildan hoodies I am a size large, however I prefer an XL-XXXL for comfort

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Hmm, I would say buy the brown one in regular small and just have it be a little big. Possibly room to grow into as well?

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I want to buy a Golf Hoodie there is a green or brown one. I want the brown one but the xs is sold out. In the green size there is xs. In the brown one there is small and i am a xs do you think I should just buy the green one or buy the brown one or just wait?

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hey i have a question

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black lives matter

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purpa cous

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This shit is so dead

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#1 Zebrakill

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Posted 04 November 2012 - 12:59 AM

We met back in 8th grade, never made a move, I was to afraid.
We clicked instantly, a friendship was made. 2 years passed,
She finally got me gassed. I liked her. We barely saw each other
But text sessions lasted forever. She sent me poetry, the girl
Was clever. She was so hot. I swear she had a fever.
She broke up with her boyfriend, it's my time. Together we can shine.
Next thing I know, she has a new one. My chance is done.

Months go by, I'm two thousand miles away. She gives me a phone call,
Just to say hey. I feel the feelings again. Instantly grab a pen, writing letters
Back and fourth. She whines about her man, I just wanna smash his head with
A can. I wanna protect her. But I can't. So I stay up late, just imagining a fight.
That started with a rant. Why'd my parents move me? Me and my love could have been free.

We chat everyday for hours. I debate having a friend send her flowers,
She's got me hooked like she got super powers. She breaks up
With that rude dude. We talk more and more. I don't dare,
Be disrespectful, she's not a whore. We text a lot, this girl has me caught.
Pretty inside and out, I think I know what she's about. Till I log on to Facebook
She's back with what's his name. That stupid football player, he ain't even have game.
I hate him. His head I wanna trim. My angers to the brim. She stops calling,
She stops texting. She stops loving. Now I'm stuck here. With paper and a pen.
Just writing to


Nothing.






That was the first ever time I tried to write poetry instead of a song. Give me some criticism or thoughts on it. I'm sure I broke lots of poetry rules.
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Posted 04 November 2012 - 01:01 AM

didnt expect to be this long...will read during halftime of deh Bulls game
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Posted 04 November 2012 - 01:07 AM

Pretty good man, and just remember there are no rules.
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Posted 04 November 2012 - 04:34 AM

beautiful
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Posted 04 November 2012 - 04:34 AM

Reminds me of "her". I'm really sorry if that's not a compliment to you.
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Posted 04 November 2012 - 04:43 AM

it's a good start, the rhythm is a little off, but good stuff. You should write more poetry :)
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Posted 04 November 2012 - 02:40 PM

you made a spelling error on the first line
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Posted 04 November 2012 - 03:06 PM

I like it!

Why do you write poems though, just curious.
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#9 Zebrakill

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Posted 05 November 2012 - 06:57 PM

I like it!

Why do you write poems though, just curious.


Well I've been writing music for like 5 years now. And I decided to do a poem for once. Instead of relying on twisting words or my word pronunciation to help the literature, i decided to do merely words that rhyme, with no beat. so the reader makes the flow in their head.
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Posted 06 November 2013 - 02:57 PM

bump


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Posted 06 November 2013 - 03:19 PM

he ain't even have game.


 


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#12 horsewang

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Posted 06 November 2013 - 04:24 PM

Damn shit was solid but yeah It reminds me of "Her" a whole lot.
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Posted 06 November 2013 - 04:25 PM

Lmao Zebra is such a loser. 


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#14 Zebrakill

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Posted 06 November 2013 - 05:17 PM

Lmao Zebra is such a loser. 

 

 

Material I take your negative energy with pride. I hope blessings upon you.


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Posted 06 November 2013 - 06:35 PM

you made a spelling error on the first line

 

i was so curmudgeonly then

 

not much has changed.

 

hey zebra, fix that error shithead


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Posted 17 November 2013 - 07:33 AM

fuck zebrakill


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Posted 17 November 2013 - 10:09 PM

you made a spelling error on the first line


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Posted 17 November 2013 - 10:20 PM

 I'm sure I broke lots of poetry rules.

 

i dont think there is rules.


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