Jump to content



Toggle shoutbox Talk

@  barmysworld : (09:17 PM)

yo

@  Material : (10:24 PM)

https://discord.gg/rN57wJg

@  Material : (04:06 PM)

join the discord

@  Material : (04:06 PM)

goldy i see you lurkin

@  Swampy : (01:44 AM)

message removed by moderator

@  Beeb : (10:28 PM)

:ronan:

@  Cheddahz : (02:30 AM)

everyone should join the discord

@  Guest : (11:06 AM)

f

@  ASTOREA2K : (04:29 PM)

@Fig join discord

@  Fig : (12:19 AM)

Good to know the forum still exists

@  Android XVII : (04:50 AM)

i feel like adam gone forever he fully a cancer

@  Wyatt : (04:59 PM)

Sup everybody

@  Wyatt : (04:59 PM)

Yo yo

@  Uhhimani : (03:32 PM)

jk ily

@  Uhhimani : (03:32 PM)

bby ass

@  Uhhimani : (03:32 PM)

im p sure he actually a cancer lol

@  Uhhimani : (03:31 PM)

is Adam bck nao

@  BEazy : (07:01 AM)

Imagine using the Shoutbox and not the discord

@  Android XVII : (09:12 PM)

where u work

@  Swampy : (01:31 AM)

Gonna call in sick tomorrow

@  Swampy : (01:30 AM)

I’m smoking big hash but I hate my job

@  Swampy : (01:29 AM)

I moved to Denver Colorado shits dope

@  Android XVII : (12:03 AM)

hiccups lowkey scary

@  Uhhimani : (02:39 AM)

I was drunk idk why my first thot was to come on here and post that..lol

@  Uhhimani : (01:46 PM)

I hv the hiccups rn. its terrible

@  A Fuckin Rad... : (10:55 PM)

First time logging on in over 6 years, just to find out UGK passed... this some 'ol bullshit

@  Android XVII : (10:30 PM)

its all good i forgive u

@  chrisb : (04:02 AM)

oops my bad

@  Android XVII : (08:54 PM)

i kno for a fact u did

@  chrisb : (01:04 AM)

i never had u on snapchat i don't think

@  Android XVII : (12:19 AM)

wtf hell naw u older than me u were always mean to me u blocked me on snapchat

@  chrisb : (04:26 AM)

:dance:

@  chrisb : (04:26 AM)

i'd get ur back android but u were mean to me when i was 16 so

@  chrisb : (04:25 AM)

it was ugk's bday the other day

@  Android XVII : (03:18 AM)

and its no OFT without khaled.... shut the whole website down its no point anymore RIP ugk17

@  Android XVII : (03:17 AM)

i was hating on white woman on twitter and khaled got mad at me and abandoned all of us

@  chrisb : (10:11 PM)

what happen

@  Uhhimani : (08:29 AM)

: /

@  Android XVII : (04:19 PM)

if u follow me on twitter that aint shit compared to other things i said
its cancer season my guy was in his feelings das all it is
wya pooch
im in colton california pull up ill giv u the hands !!!! im fighting in the name of dj khaled and ima win cause americans can't lose to british ass fuckniggas

@  Android XVII : (04:18 PM)

i said its a lot of demonic elf looking white girls and my dude snapped

@  Android XVII : (04:16 PM)

u wasn't even there pooch stfu.... khaled sensitive ass got offended by a tweet how is that my fault

@  Pooch : (02:28 PM)

Hey Android, if I ever see you I will smash you into a pulp you useless cunt, fuck you.

@  tylersgay : (11:18 AM)

you know what im out too

@  tylersgay : (11:18 AM)

fuck MTY

@  tylersgay : (11:17 AM)

damn we lost a brother

@  tylersgay : (11:17 AM)

im the new manager of oft ladies and gents

@  Android XVII : (05:19 AM)

say it to face pussy

@  Android XVII : (05:19 AM)

fight me matty

@  Android XVII : (01:47 AM)

u wasn't even there matty

@  Android XVII : (01:34 AM)

:earl: :earl: :earl: :earl:

@  MTY : (01:08 AM)

bro shut up

@  Android XVII : (12:50 AM)

fucka twitter beef

@  Android XVII : (12:49 AM)

prayers up for my nigga khaled until i die

@  Android XVII : (12:48 AM)

bruh i love khaled im forreals sad i hurt his feelings i aint mean to do all that i jus b wildin on the internet.... i genuinely did not think i could affect somebody else mental state with internet words

@  Android XVII : (12:37 AM)

we witnessing the end of an era

@  Android XVII : (12:35 AM)

i dont kno how i got banned from twitter off such an inoffensive tweet but i believe u

@  Android XVII : (12:34 AM)

<3

@  KHALED : (12:30 AM)

@ Steve Berman : (16 July 2013 - 01:38 PM)chick fil a doesn't hate gays, they serve me all the time

@  KHALED : (12:29 AM)

fuck this, enjoy the site. im changing my password to something i dont know and im not coming back

@  KHALED : (12:28 AM)

and no you dont have to take the job seriously, i dont ban people on here unless its that one weird dude Kendrick or whatever

@  KHALED : (12:27 AM)

oh shut the fuck up, i never got you banned, i never reported your dumb tweets i just blocked you

@  Android XVII : (12:21 AM)

really got me banned from twitter for 12 hours

@  Android XVII : (12:18 AM)

jus because i made fun of white womann on twitter

@  Android XVII : (12:17 AM)

khaled i kno u mad at me but please don't ban me from the shout box

@  tylersgay : (04:40 PM)

or can we fuck around

@  tylersgay : (04:39 PM)

@KHALED do we have to take the role seriously

@  KHALED : (01:43 AM)

to be*

@  KHALED : (01:43 AM)

anyone want to me management? im never coming back to this site

@  KHALED : (11:24 PM)

lil bitch

@  Android XVII : (09:24 PM)

detroit

@  KHALED : (01:09 AM)

im a big sean fanboy

@  KHALED : (01:09 AM)

boii

@  KHALED : (01:09 AM)

boii

@  Uhhimani : (05:48 AM)

:hansen:

@  ASTOREA2K : (11:24 PM)

@Uhhimani post ur nudes

@  Uhhimani : (08:58 PM)

*I needa stop drinking too I'm not an alcoholic but I suk too much dick when I'm drunk*

@  Uhhimani : (08:57 PM)

stop drinking and just use thc

@  Uhhimani : (08:56 PM)

pooch get ur life together

@  Uhhimani : (08:56 PM)

omg pooch is online ayeeee

@  Uhhimani : (08:55 PM)

u kno its forever papi

@  Uhhimani : (08:55 PM)

@KHALED ily 2

@  Uhhimani : (08:55 PM)

y'all ready for new bby $ muzic

@  ASTOREA2K : (12:40 PM)

make me admin

@  ASTOREA2K : (12:40 PM)

kevin

@  Pooch : (10:03 PM)

and potential virgin

@  Pooch : (10:03 PM)

Hey smitty I see you online, are you still a sad fat bstard

@  Pooch : (12:01 AM)

Because I was too wasted to make food and they were lying there from the morning

@  Android XVII : (11:20 PM)

grossss why are u eating cold beans

@  Pooch : (02:35 AM)

but at least i'm not smitty

@  Pooch : (02:35 AM)

life is bad

@  Pooch : (02:32 AM)

i am eating cold beans

@  Pooch : (02:29 AM)

i nedd more acllohol

@  Pooch : (02:28 AM)

i have spnet the past two hours cruying

@  Pooch : (02:28 AM)

fuck smitty though

@  Pooch : (02:27 AM)

troy is ignoring me

@  KHALED : (02:23 AM)

but i really do have a place here where you can stay

@  KHALED : (02:23 AM)

that or we sleep on troys floor in la

@  KHALED : (02:21 AM)

poor smitty

@  KHALED : (02:21 AM)

come to australia, i have somewhere for you to live @ Pooch : (08:52 AM) Edit icon Me and my girlfriend broke up so I am fucking depressed so I came here to cheer myself up by reminding myself that smitty is probably still a fat fucking virgin bordering on 40

@  KHALED : (02:21 AM)

@Pooch join discord


Photo

A poem


  • Please log in to reply
17 replies to this topic

#1 Zebrakill

Zebrakill

    Peace, Love & Happiness

  • Members
  • 1,020 posts
  • Joined 09-May 12
  • LocationEvery teenage girls heart

Posted 04 November 2012 - 12:59 AM

We met back in 8th grade, never made a move, I was to afraid.
We clicked instantly, a friendship was made. 2 years passed,
She finally got me gassed. I liked her. We barely saw each other
But text sessions lasted forever. She sent me poetry, the girl
Was clever. She was so hot. I swear she had a fever.
She broke up with her boyfriend, it's my time. Together we can shine.
Next thing I know, she has a new one. My chance is done.

Months go by, I'm two thousand miles away. She gives me a phone call,
Just to say hey. I feel the feelings again. Instantly grab a pen, writing letters
Back and fourth. She whines about her man, I just wanna smash his head with
A can. I wanna protect her. But I can't. So I stay up late, just imagining a fight.
That started with a rant. Why'd my parents move me? Me and my love could have been free.

We chat everyday for hours. I debate having a friend send her flowers,
She's got me hooked like she got super powers. She breaks up
With that rude dude. We talk more and more. I don't dare,
Be disrespectful, she's not a whore. We text a lot, this girl has me caught.
Pretty inside and out, I think I know what she's about. Till I log on to Facebook
She's back with what's his name. That stupid football player, he ain't even have game.
I hate him. His head I wanna trim. My angers to the brim. She stops calling,
She stops texting. She stops loving. Now I'm stuck here. With paper and a pen.
Just writing to


Nothing.






That was the first ever time I tried to write poetry instead of a song. Give me some criticism or thoughts on it. I'm sure I broke lots of poetry rules.
  • 1
OFT SAVIOR

#2 beej

beej

    Swings the biggest balls on OFT

  • ✞ Premium ✞
  • 12,555 posts
  • Joined 16-May 11
  • Locationselling crack to single mothers.

Posted 04 November 2012 - 01:01 AM

didnt expect to be this long...will read during halftime of deh Bulls game
  • 0

#3 Pikachu

Pikachu

    Member

  • Members
  • 144 posts
  • Joined 29-July 12

Posted 04 November 2012 - 01:07 AM

Pretty good man, and just remember there are no rules.
  • 0

#4 Costa

Costa

    The Untouchable Maybach Empire Presents

  • Members
  • 3,630 posts
  • Joined 03-November 12

Posted 04 November 2012 - 04:34 AM

beautiful
  • 0

#5 chrisb

chrisb

    Ryan's arm

  • ugk17
  • 4,646 posts
  • Joined 29-April 11

Posted 04 November 2012 - 04:34 AM

Reminds me of "her". I'm really sorry if that's not a compliment to you.
  • 0

#6 sm123

sm123

    Rare Bollocks

  • ✞ Premium ✞
  • 1,690 posts
  • Joined 19-April 12
  • Locationthere

Posted 04 November 2012 - 04:43 AM

it's a good start, the rhythm is a little off, but good stuff. You should write more poetry :)
  • 0

7ICyw.jpg

 

 

 


#7 Jack

Jack

    Ryan's arm

  • ✞ Premium ✞
  • 8,568 posts
  • Joined 14-May 11
  • LocationAustin, Texas

Posted 04 November 2012 - 02:40 PM

you made a spelling error on the first line
  • 0

#8 Internet Coma

Internet Coma

    Inside an Internet Coma

  • ✞ Premium ✞
  • 415 posts
  • Joined 17-August 12
  • LocationCanada

Posted 04 November 2012 - 03:06 PM

I like it!

Why do you write poems though, just curious.
  • 0

Take it Sleazy, and I'm Out.


#9 Zebrakill

Zebrakill

    Peace, Love & Happiness

  • Members
  • 1,020 posts
  • Joined 09-May 12
  • LocationEvery teenage girls heart

Posted 05 November 2012 - 06:57 PM

I like it!

Why do you write poems though, just curious.


Well I've been writing music for like 5 years now. And I decided to do a poem for once. Instead of relying on twisting words or my word pronunciation to help the literature, i decided to do merely words that rhyme, with no beat. so the reader makes the flow in their head.
  • 1
OFT SAVIOR

#10 Jakes Dad

Jakes Dad

    http://bit.ly/1gvS00y

  • ✞ Premium ✞
  • 1,809 posts
  • Joined 14-August 12
  • LocationRed

Posted 06 November 2013 - 02:57 PM

bump


  • 1

#11 Guest_Hobo_*

Guest_Hobo_*
  • Guests
  • Joined --

Posted 06 November 2013 - 03:19 PM

he ain't even have game.


 


  • 0

#12 horsewang

horsewang

    Kill Them All

  • Members
  • 1,634 posts
  • Joined 17-June 13

Posted 06 November 2013 - 04:24 PM

Damn shit was solid but yeah It reminds me of "Her" a whole lot.
  • 0

#13 Material

Material

    Will Ban, Won't Care

  • Retired Moderator
  • 6,166 posts
  • Joined 29-September 11

Posted 06 November 2013 - 04:25 PM

Lmao Zebra is such a loser. 


  • 0

I dislike mostly all of the members on this site.


#14 Zebrakill

Zebrakill

    Peace, Love & Happiness

  • Members
  • 1,020 posts
  • Joined 09-May 12
  • LocationEvery teenage girls heart

Posted 06 November 2013 - 05:17 PM

Lmao Zebra is such a loser. 

 

 

Material I take your negative energy with pride. I hope blessings upon you.


  • 0
OFT SAVIOR

#15 Jack

Jack

    Ryan's arm

  • ✞ Premium ✞
  • 8,568 posts
  • Joined 14-May 11
  • LocationAustin, Texas

Posted 06 November 2013 - 06:35 PM

you made a spelling error on the first line

 

i was so curmudgeonly then

 

not much has changed.

 

hey zebra, fix that error shithead


  • 0

#16 Barakon

Barakon

    #1 Henchman

  • Members
  • 1,029 posts
  • Joined 09-July 12
  • LocationLouisiana

Posted 17 November 2013 - 07:33 AM

fuck zebrakill


  • 0
The Lame God has spoken.

#17 Khalid

Khalid

    Kaaaaaaw

  • Members
  • 650 posts
  • Joined 28-August 12
  • LocationBaker, Louisiana

Posted 17 November 2013 - 10:09 PM

you made a spelling error on the first line


  • 0
Posted Image MMMMMMMMMMMMMMM DONUTS!!!!!!!!

#18 ugk17

ugk17

    full anal nelson

  • ugk17
  • 11,754 posts
  • Joined 14-September 11
  • LocationMinnesota

Posted 17 November 2013 - 10:20 PM

 I'm sure I broke lots of poetry rules.

 

i dont think there is rules.


  • 0
I love you :)




0 user(s) are reading this topic

0 members, 0 guests, 0 anonymous users