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@  ASTOREA2K : (01:31 PM)

steroids is as life long commitment

@  Android XVII : (04:38 AM)

u still fuckin with the valium or u switched substances completely

@  Android XVII : (04:37 AM)

i need to smoke weed with khaled in australia at steve erwins grave before i die

@  Android XVII : (04:37 AM)

what the fuccckkkkk khaled on steroids and weed now????? its a new mf era

@  KHALED : (08:45 PM)

howdy

@  ASTOREA2K : (05:32 PM)

hey fellas

@  KHALED : (05:00 AM)

the price is on the can though

@  KHALED : (04:59 AM)

its definitely kevin, all bad things are kevin

@  KHALED : (04:59 AM)

@MTY Kevin is a bitch for that

@  KHALED : (04:58 AM)

@Jack my personal life sucks dick

@  MTY : (04:00 AM)

@KHALED it seems that someone else (may or may not be Kevin) got a hold of the page and kicked me then started posting regularly again cuz I gave up due to a lack of interest

@  Jack : (03:19 AM)

tell me about your personal life

@  KHALED : (01:10 AM)

on e2 inhibitor and hcg so i can maintain my ball size and they dont shrink

@  KHALED : (01:09 AM)

i used my thigh over ass though

@  KHALED : (01:09 AM)

and its easy to just shoot it

@  KHALED : (01:08 AM)

not sure if its true, just what i heard

@  KHALED : (01:08 AM)

shooting, i heard bad stuff about oral

@  KHALED : (01:08 AM)

test e

@  Swampy : (12:53 AM)

Orally or shooting it in your ass

@  Swampy : (12:51 AM)

U taking tren?

@  KHALED : (10:41 PM)

fuck, give me georgey

@  KHALED : (10:41 PM)

or derper

@  KHALED : (10:41 PM)

or jack

@  KHALED : (10:41 PM)

or mty

@  KHALED : (10:41 PM)

or astorea

@  KHALED : (10:40 PM)

wheres android

@  KHALED : (10:37 PM)

no homo

@  KHALED : (10:37 PM)

bro when your take steroids you get so fucking horny from the testosterone, youd damn near fuck a dude

@  KHALED : (10:36 PM)

no lie no lie no lieieieie

@  KHALED : (10:36 PM)

i started smoking weed again and doign steroids

@  KHALED : (10:36 PM)

i been away a while

@  KHALED : (10:31 PM)

@MTY werent you like the only thing keeping it alive?

@  KHALED : (10:30 PM)

OFT 2 is wild man, got mad bitches in there@ Android XVII : (03:54 AM) i feel like khaled joined oft2

@  MTY : (05:48 PM)

lol i think they kicked me off the odd future talk FB page lmao

@  Guest : (08:13 PM)

And also im working on a project thats gunna be less experimental so id appreciate if you will listen to it when it comes out

@  Guest : (08:12 PM)

Thanks for listening. Do u guys have any advice for me to grow my music.

@  Jack : (08:08 PM)

hm

@  ASTOREA2K : (10:49 PM)

Not really my thing bro but keep going

@  Guest : (03:07 AM)

Also if u like it, id appreciate it if u can follow me on my insta @NexDoorNeighbor if u here more updates for my shit

@  Guest : (03:06 AM)

Im just starting to post my stuff online and all I want out of it is for people to enjoy it, idc about the money for now. Hopefully u guys like it and Ill definitely be coming back here regularly

@  Guest : (03:05 AM)

Hey I see you guys are big Tyler fans just like me, and I am actually new to these forums. If any one of you guys wanna check my music out, you can check it out here https://soundcloud.com/user-750376687.

@  ASTOREA2K : (12:27 AM)

imma miss u

@  ASTOREA2K : (12:27 AM)

damn bye derper

@  Android XVII : (11:27 PM)

oft forever ima stay on this bitch til I'm the last 1

@  Android XVII : (11:27 PM)

derper u afuckin pussy nigga

@  Android XVII : (11:27 PM)

rest in peace

@  tylersgay : (09:01 PM)

bye

@  tylersgay : (09:01 PM)

im logging out forever

@  Android XVII : (11:49 PM)

what happen to snyarf

@  tylersgay : (07:39 PM)

where the honey dips @

@  tylersgay : (07:38 PM)

wheres narkwolf @

@  tylersgay : (07:38 PM)

yikes bruh

@  ASTOREA2K : (03:21 PM)

https://www.instagram.com/p/BnfCwzpHL7B/

@  ASTOREA2K : (03:19 PM)

i remember Ivel was the only dude on here who's rapping voice ia ctually liked

@  ASTOREA2K : (03:18 PM)

shoutout jetlag jacking of to pics of Rocky

@  ASTOREA2K : (03:17 PM)

wheres madmurderz at

@  Android XVII : (07:45 AM)

what the fuck is an antlive

@  Android XVII : (07:45 AM)

classic picture

@  ASTOREA2K : (12:05 AM)

lmao i remember it so vividly

@  tylersgay : (10:29 PM)

weird how you described it so perfectly

@  tylersgay : (10:29 PM)

LMAO yeah that one

@  ASTOREA2K : (10:19 PM)

like a video game cover art

@  ASTOREA2K : (10:19 PM)

you mean the one with the stache and he was like doing eyes up chin down

@  tylersgay : (08:59 PM)

i used to play transformice with him 24/7

@  tylersgay : (08:58 PM)

lol i remember there was a pic of him

@  ASTOREA2K : (05:38 PM)

i dont remember, im not sure how much about him was like made up and what was real

@  tylersgay : (02:17 PM)

wasnt he homeschooled

@  ASTOREA2K : (01:07 PM)

i wonder what 133 is doing

@  ASTOREA2K : (01:07 PM)

man

@  ASTOREA2K : (01:07 PM)

lmao

@  Android XVII : (03:54 AM)

i feel like khaled joined oft2

@  Android XVII : (03:53 AM)

coogi polo classic i always bump that shit

@  tylersgay : (01:27 PM)

we the last of a dying breed

@  tylersgay : (01:26 PM)

yes bruh

@  ASTOREA2K : (05:31 PM)

you changed your name !

@  ASTOREA2K : (05:31 PM)

ooo

@  tylersgay : (01:51 PM)

aka hodgy beats

@  tylersgay : (01:50 PM)

derper

@  ASTOREA2K : (01:27 PM)

@tylersgay who are you?

@  tylersgay : (12:39 PM)

darn i hate it when it dont hyperlink :@

@  tylersgay : (12:38 PM)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ByVDLi8gF-w who remembers this oft blassic

@  tylersgay : (12:07 PM)

fo sho

@  Android XVII : (01:45 AM)

fuck odd future

@  Android XVII : (01:45 AM)

straight up this the only real oddfuturetalk

@  Guest : (02:18 AM)

What's up Gooberz

@  tylersgay : (07:35 PM)

OFT V2 = TRAITORS

@  Android XVII : (02:08 AM)

khaledwya

@  Android XVII : (02:08 AM)

what it do

@  Beeb : (09:36 PM)

:beeb:

@  Android XVII : (04:53 AM)

i need to see what oft 2 is like

@  KHALED : (09:29 PM)

but either way, at least im not a virgin posting in OFT V2

@  KHALED : (09:28 PM)

or that julien dude asking what happened, like fuck, you dumbfucks stopped coming here, thats what happened

@  KHALED : (09:28 PM)

like writing rip

@  KHALED : (09:28 PM)

its so fucking lame when people come on here to say the sites dead like they are making a fucking revelation about it

@  PaulMurphy : (07:54 PM)

rip

@  Android XVII : (08:40 PM)

he snitching on some fuckniggas tho so it cancels it out

@  Android XVII : (08:40 PM)

who is a snitch 6ix9ine??

@  tylersgay : (07:13 PM)

:@

@  Gnatuw : (07:03 PM)

@Android XVII u support a snitch :pope:

@  Gnatuw : (07:02 PM)

frick the population


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#1 Zebrakill

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Posted 04 November 2012 - 12:59 AM

We met back in 8th grade, never made a move, I was to afraid.
We clicked instantly, a friendship was made. 2 years passed,
She finally got me gassed. I liked her. We barely saw each other
But text sessions lasted forever. She sent me poetry, the girl
Was clever. She was so hot. I swear she had a fever.
She broke up with her boyfriend, it's my time. Together we can shine.
Next thing I know, she has a new one. My chance is done.

Months go by, I'm two thousand miles away. She gives me a phone call,
Just to say hey. I feel the feelings again. Instantly grab a pen, writing letters
Back and fourth. She whines about her man, I just wanna smash his head with
A can. I wanna protect her. But I can't. So I stay up late, just imagining a fight.
That started with a rant. Why'd my parents move me? Me and my love could have been free.

We chat everyday for hours. I debate having a friend send her flowers,
She's got me hooked like she got super powers. She breaks up
With that rude dude. We talk more and more. I don't dare,
Be disrespectful, she's not a whore. We text a lot, this girl has me caught.
Pretty inside and out, I think I know what she's about. Till I log on to Facebook
She's back with what's his name. That stupid football player, he ain't even have game.
I hate him. His head I wanna trim. My angers to the brim. She stops calling,
She stops texting. She stops loving. Now I'm stuck here. With paper and a pen.
Just writing to


Nothing.






That was the first ever time I tried to write poetry instead of a song. Give me some criticism or thoughts on it. I'm sure I broke lots of poetry rules.
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#2 beej

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Posted 04 November 2012 - 01:01 AM

didnt expect to be this long...will read during halftime of deh Bulls game
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Posted 04 November 2012 - 01:07 AM

Pretty good man, and just remember there are no rules.
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Posted 04 November 2012 - 04:34 AM

beautiful
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Posted 04 November 2012 - 04:34 AM

Reminds me of "her". I'm really sorry if that's not a compliment to you.
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Posted 04 November 2012 - 04:43 AM

it's a good start, the rhythm is a little off, but good stuff. You should write more poetry :)
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#7 Jack

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Posted 04 November 2012 - 02:40 PM

you made a spelling error on the first line
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Posted 04 November 2012 - 03:06 PM

I like it!

Why do you write poems though, just curious.
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#9 Zebrakill

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Posted 05 November 2012 - 06:57 PM

I like it!

Why do you write poems though, just curious.


Well I've been writing music for like 5 years now. And I decided to do a poem for once. Instead of relying on twisting words or my word pronunciation to help the literature, i decided to do merely words that rhyme, with no beat. so the reader makes the flow in their head.
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Posted 06 November 2013 - 02:57 PM

bump


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Posted 06 November 2013 - 03:19 PM

he ain't even have game.


 


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#12 horsewang

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Posted 06 November 2013 - 04:24 PM

Damn shit was solid but yeah It reminds me of "Her" a whole lot.
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Posted 06 November 2013 - 04:25 PM

Lmao Zebra is such a loser. 


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#14 Zebrakill

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Posted 06 November 2013 - 05:17 PM

Lmao Zebra is such a loser. 

 

 

Material I take your negative energy with pride. I hope blessings upon you.


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Posted 06 November 2013 - 06:35 PM

you made a spelling error on the first line

 

i was so curmudgeonly then

 

not much has changed.

 

hey zebra, fix that error shithead


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#16 Barakon

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Posted 17 November 2013 - 07:33 AM

fuck zebrakill


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Posted 17 November 2013 - 10:09 PM

you made a spelling error on the first line


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Posted 17 November 2013 - 10:20 PM

 I'm sure I broke lots of poetry rules.

 

i dont think there is rules.


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