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@  ASTOREA2K : (03:21 AM)

i hate snow khaled we can trade

@  BEazy : (04:36 AM)

Ooooh a discord!

@  KHALED : (10:01 PM)

its middle of summer here so its trash

@  KHALED : (10:01 PM)

i want to experience christmas where it snows and is cold

@  KHALED : (10:00 PM)

thats dope

@  ASTOREA2K : (11:10 PM)

this old ass annoying disney special

@  ASTOREA2K : (11:10 PM)

@KHALED yeah lmao

@  Uhhimani : (10:03 PM)

super ez edibles I made once I was high asfawk

@  Uhhimani : (10:03 PM)

sandwich peanut butter and weed in 2 graham crackers wrap in foil and bake it!!

@  Uhhimani : (10:02 PM)

https://www.foodbeast.com/news/the-firecracker-is-the-easiest-weed-edible-you-will-ever-make/

@  KHALED : (09:36 PM)

fuck i have been high for like 2 months straight with only a couple hours of being sober each day and i am kinda over it. i want to be sober for a while

@  KHALED : (09:35 PM)

6 god blocboy

@  KHALED : (09:35 PM)

bro i choked on sugar this morning eating breakfast, i was dying

@  KHALED : (09:35 PM)

except android, who will be admin

@  KHALED : (09:35 PM)

ill make everyone mod

@  KHALED : (09:35 PM)

https://discord.gg/abjjfc3

@  KHALED : (09:33 PM)

i was listening to the radio and a swedish woman rang up and said its tradition and i was like wtf

@  KHALED : (09:32 PM)

@ASTOREA2K yo is it for real that sweden watches Donald Duck cartoons on christmas?

@  KHALED : (09:32 PM)

like they just arent something you come across over here much unless you make your own and i couldnt be bothered

@  KHALED : (09:32 PM)

i never had edibles

@  Uhhimani : (11:40 AM)

do u like edibles @KHALED

@  Uhhimani : (07:26 PM)

kisses@ KHALED : (12:09 AM) i forgive you imani

@  Android XVII : (02:58 AM)

oh that's coo some1 make 1 den

@  ASTOREA2K : (07:34 PM)

@Android XVII its like skype but for gamers

@  KHALED : (10:28 PM)

i like discord, id like a server

@  KHALED : (10:27 PM)

@ ASTOREA2K : (12:21 PM) Edit icon @Uhhimani please let me cum in you

@  KHALED : (10:27 PM)

well then stop having your weird white kids shoot up schools dumbass @ Fuck Flog Gnaw : (08:33 AM) Edit icon And school shootings is way too callus of a joke

@  KHALED : (10:26 PM)

my grandma was aboriginal, fuck yall

@  KHALED : (10:26 PM)

thats literally the dumbest most racist shit ive heard, saying they arent "black". americans are fucking weird

@  KHALED : (10:26 PM)

apparently this guy isnt black? http://rightnow.org....1_z-640x440.jpg

@  KHALED : (10:25 PM)

lmao what @ Fuck Flog Gnaw : (08:32 AM) Edit icon @Khaled they're not "black" people

@  Android XVII : (06:46 PM)

i don't really know bout discord its like team speak or something right

@  ASTOREA2K : (12:31 AM)

id be down for that

@  ASTOREA2K : (12:31 AM)

for real

@  tylersgay : (12:10 AM)

should make a discord server tbh

@  Android XVII : (11:50 PM)

but we still a family tho

@  Android XVII : (11:50 PM)

nobody ever on at the same time

@  tylersgay : (07:08 PM)

hi

@  tylersgay : (07:08 PM)

i remember your name

@  Wyatt : (05:22 PM)

:(

@  Wyatt : (05:22 PM)

whenever i come on tho nobody is around

@  Wyatt : (05:22 PM)

god damn i still think about this site all the time

@  Wyatt : (05:05 PM)

anyone here

@  Wyatt : (05:05 PM)

yo yo

@  ASTOREA2K : (10:20 PM)

i have a gf lmao

@  Android XVII : (09:15 PM)

we need to get astorea some pussy

@  Android XVII : (09:14 PM)

bruh i got punched in the face yesterday n i didn't even see who did it :(

@  ASTOREA2K : (07:52 PM)

@tylersgay my bad my bad

@  tylersgay : (12:28 PM)

.

@  ASTOREA2K : (02:21 AM)

@Uhhimani please let me cum in you

@  Fuck Flog Gnaw : (10:33 PM)

And school shootings is way too callus of a joke

@  Fuck Flog Gnaw : (10:32 PM)

@Khaled they're not "black" people

@  KHALED : (07:09 AM)

i forgive you imani

@  Uhhimani : (02:19 AM)

:D

@  Beeb : (11:26 PM)

:beeb:

@  KHALED : (11:11 PM)

which was hilarious considering its a black country that white people took over

@  KHALED : (11:11 PM)

i remember someone on here asking me if australia has black people

@  KHALED : (11:10 PM)

i am shocked ireland has black people

@  KHALED : (11:10 PM)

this song slaps https://www.youtube....h?v=j83M-EDduOM

@  KHALED : (02:48 AM)

man ive spent like 3 hours today just arguing with a nazi on reddit. im exhausted

@  KHALED : (02:48 AM)

but hey, we dont have school shootings

@  KHALED : (02:48 AM)

and racist

@  KHALED : (02:48 AM)

you know what, everything i was going to joke about to insult @Fuck Flog Gnaw applies to australians just as much as americans in regards to being fat and shit

@  KHALED : (02:46 AM)

im like so rural that theres only like 3 muslim people in the whole town, most people here arent religious.

@  KHALED : (02:45 AM)

oh thats dope

@  ASTOREA2K : (05:55 PM)

@KHALED no but ive grown up around muslim culture all my life and seeing my friends do it every year made me wanna do it

@  Fuck Flog Gnaw : (05:16 PM)

Are Australians ugly because they descend from criminals?

@  tylersgay : (12:11 PM)

_

@  tylersgay : (12:07 PM)

@Android XVII lol

@  tylersgay : (12:07 PM)

@KHALED thanks

@  tylersgay : (12:06 PM)

Subhanallah brother stay strong @ ASTOREA2K : (09:43 PM) doing my first ramadan ever rn @ ASTOREA2K : (09:43 PM) @tylersgay mashallah

@  KHALED : (05:47 AM)

im making a turkey and cheese toasted sandwich

@  Android XVII : (10:50 PM)

damn bruh i already ate food or i woulda fucked with yall

@  KHALED : (10:06 PM)

but happy ramadan to all my muslim homies.

@  KHALED : (10:05 PM)

is u muslim now astorea?

@  ASTOREA2K : (08:43 PM)

doing my first ramadan ever rn

@  ASTOREA2K : (08:43 PM)

@tylersgay mashallah

@  Android XVII : (08:17 PM)

lena fucked up when she got fake titties

@  tylersgay : (04:24 PM)

happy ramadan

@  Uhhimani : (09:47 PM)

@lena

@  Uhhimani : (09:47 PM)

her nipples are atrocious

@  Android XVII : (09:27 PM)

kim kardashian jafar era>>>>>

@  Android XVII : (09:26 PM)

lena kind of bad but yeah she kinda look like jafar tho

@  Ryan : (05:29 PM)

IGOR

@  ASTOREA2K : (04:45 PM)

lena

@  KHALED : (11:05 PM)

i dont know, shes got an ugly face

@  KHALED : (11:05 PM)

or is it leda?

@  KHALED : (11:05 PM)

except he fucks that lena girl and riley reid so good for him

@  KHALED : (11:05 PM)

adam22 embarrasses every other adam

@  Android XVII : (07:31 PM)

adam22 is a legend as much as i don't fuck with him

@  Uhhimani : (03:38 PM)

idk I find him entertaining

@  Uhhimani : (03:38 PM)

Adam 22

@  Uhhimani : (03:38 PM)

jk hahaha

@  Uhhimani : (03:38 PM)

yes agreed we luh u @adam22

@  Android XVII : (12:59 AM)

white ass monster energy warehouse i need yall to pray for me

@  Android XVII : (12:59 AM)

6 pm - 230 am

@  Android XVII : (12:59 AM)

i got another job now i hav worse hours than before

@  Android XVII : (12:58 AM)

and that's why he fell in love with her

@  Android XVII : (12:58 AM)

rest in peace thomas his girlfriend has the same name as me

@  Android XVII : (12:57 AM)

chickens are pretty scary


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#1 Zebrakill

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Posted 04 November 2012 - 12:59 AM

We met back in 8th grade, never made a move, I was to afraid.
We clicked instantly, a friendship was made. 2 years passed,
She finally got me gassed. I liked her. We barely saw each other
But text sessions lasted forever. She sent me poetry, the girl
Was clever. She was so hot. I swear she had a fever.
She broke up with her boyfriend, it's my time. Together we can shine.
Next thing I know, she has a new one. My chance is done.

Months go by, I'm two thousand miles away. She gives me a phone call,
Just to say hey. I feel the feelings again. Instantly grab a pen, writing letters
Back and fourth. She whines about her man, I just wanna smash his head with
A can. I wanna protect her. But I can't. So I stay up late, just imagining a fight.
That started with a rant. Why'd my parents move me? Me and my love could have been free.

We chat everyday for hours. I debate having a friend send her flowers,
She's got me hooked like she got super powers. She breaks up
With that rude dude. We talk more and more. I don't dare,
Be disrespectful, she's not a whore. We text a lot, this girl has me caught.
Pretty inside and out, I think I know what she's about. Till I log on to Facebook
She's back with what's his name. That stupid football player, he ain't even have game.
I hate him. His head I wanna trim. My angers to the brim. She stops calling,
She stops texting. She stops loving. Now I'm stuck here. With paper and a pen.
Just writing to


Nothing.






That was the first ever time I tried to write poetry instead of a song. Give me some criticism or thoughts on it. I'm sure I broke lots of poetry rules.
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#2 beej

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Posted 04 November 2012 - 01:01 AM

didnt expect to be this long...will read during halftime of deh Bulls game
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Posted 04 November 2012 - 01:07 AM

Pretty good man, and just remember there are no rules.
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Posted 04 November 2012 - 04:34 AM

beautiful
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Posted 04 November 2012 - 04:34 AM

Reminds me of "her". I'm really sorry if that's not a compliment to you.
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Posted 04 November 2012 - 04:43 AM

it's a good start, the rhythm is a little off, but good stuff. You should write more poetry :)
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Posted 04 November 2012 - 02:40 PM

you made a spelling error on the first line
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Posted 04 November 2012 - 03:06 PM

I like it!

Why do you write poems though, just curious.
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#9 Zebrakill

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Posted 05 November 2012 - 06:57 PM

I like it!

Why do you write poems though, just curious.


Well I've been writing music for like 5 years now. And I decided to do a poem for once. Instead of relying on twisting words or my word pronunciation to help the literature, i decided to do merely words that rhyme, with no beat. so the reader makes the flow in their head.
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Posted 06 November 2013 - 02:57 PM

bump


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Posted 06 November 2013 - 03:19 PM

he ain't even have game.


 


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#12 horsewang

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Posted 06 November 2013 - 04:24 PM

Damn shit was solid but yeah It reminds me of "Her" a whole lot.
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Posted 06 November 2013 - 04:25 PM

Lmao Zebra is such a loser. 


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#14 Zebrakill

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Posted 06 November 2013 - 05:17 PM

Lmao Zebra is such a loser. 

 

 

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Posted 06 November 2013 - 06:35 PM

you made a spelling error on the first line

 

i was so curmudgeonly then

 

not much has changed.

 

hey zebra, fix that error shithead


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#16 Barakon

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Posted 17 November 2013 - 07:33 AM

fuck zebrakill


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Posted 17 November 2013 - 10:09 PM

you made a spelling error on the first line


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Posted 17 November 2013 - 10:20 PM

 I'm sure I broke lots of poetry rules.

 

i dont think there is rules.


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