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[bmoore93]

Feedback please. My goal is to have OF actually use one of my beats. FREE EARL.

[bmoore93]

cont.

[BladeSaidWadup]

find ya own style tho brah

[Pooch]

find ya own style tho brah

This.

[bmoore93]

find ya own style tho brah

I know what you mean, but half the stuff I've made was before I had even heard of Odd Future. Our styles sort of mesh perfectly.

[Carl Sweatpants]

I like Beach Bum the best. But, take my word for it, you'll make a lot better music if you don't try to imitate. Do you. You can draw influence from OF but don't just try to be them.

[BladeSaidWadup]

I know what you mean, but half the stuff I've made was before I had even heard of Odd Future. Our styles sort of mesh perfectly.

You're no where close their level though, they wouldn't really sound right on these since these are type knock-offs


but practice makes perfect so keep at it boo

[bmoore93]

You're no where close their level though, they wouldn't really sound right on these since these are type knock-offs


but practice makes perfect so keep at it boo

Thanks, I like being insulted and complemented at the same time.

[DRugs]

I like Beach bum and captain pleasure...I can't hear OF on any of these beats tho lol

[sourgrapefruit]

"Captain Pleasure" sounded like "Up" a little.

[paleface]

I like them man they're cool. Just keep up the good work.

[Contro Verse E]

Oh shit. I did a song over your beat on yotube and added a video response. It sucks though.

[paleface]

Oh shit. I did a song over your beat on yotube and added a video response. It sucks though.

r u signed?

[Contro Verse E]

r u signed?

No.

[bmoore93]

Oh shit. I did a song over your beat on yotube and added a video response. It sucks though.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZJPaV1XDHjQ&lc=Ekk6t81q9Dupy6lVBKLMArmaTDK20MCuEzj2-jrMQSI&feature=inbox

We meet again at last. I'm just trying to get some exposure on my beats. More Feedback please!!

[chrisb]

beach bum is good.
I'm not going to listen to anything else though because I'm a pretty busy person, and I don't like the way your advertising, but good job.
People saying that they can't hear Odd Future rapping over your songs shouldn't be taken as an insult. All of the best songs I've heard would be shit if ANYBODY tried to rap over them.
Uhhh, not saying that you're really good, but I do like beach bum, and I think it's best without odd future rapping over it.
If you could develop a style off that, get rid of this dark hype shit, and maybe add more progression, and less beat repeat I think you could make some really sick stuff. But of course that's just my opinion on what you could do to make the experience better for me.

Hope that means something.

[chrisb]

It sucks though.

Hey you're right!

[thesidekick]

Add more of a melody like for VCR/Wheels, She, and you'll be good. I saw you millions of times on youtube, but I didn't like them that much to be honest. Beach Bum is nice.

[Contro Verse E]

Hey you're right!

Thank you. Im tired of people saying my songs sound good when they are really shit. Im still gonna keep rapping until I improve though.

[Spetalsk]

Sad that everybody likes Beach Bum ... The only sampled song. Seriously, advertising your beats as "odd future type beats" isn't the right way, but you are getting their.

Oh and ControVerseE, how is anyone going to be able to hear what you rap with that pitch?

[Contro Verse E]

Sad that everybody likes Beach Bum ... The only sampled song. Seriously, advertising your beats as "odd future type beats" isn't the right way, but you are getting their.

Oh and ControVerseE, how is anyone going to be able to hear what you rap with that pitch?

I sound retarded when I rap in my regular ptich. I change it.

[Spetalsk]

I sound retarded when I rap in my regular ptich. I change it.

Well thats still better then not understanding what you say at all.

[Contro Verse E]

Well thats still better then not understanding what you say at all.

I think it's more because I didn't put the volume of my voice up enough.

I have another song where you hear my voice better.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CoR7Db_E12w&lc=VJhePeGBIagXL-XmvC6LSgVx7padwoJnve_8PfEfsTo&feature=inbox

[chrisb]

Thank you. Im tired of people saying my songs sound good when they are really shit. Im still gonna keep rapping until I improve though.

You've just got that teen rapper voice. Maybe you should stick to writing until your voice gets better, and then put up songs.
Just my opinion though.
I'm a hater.

[applesauce]

beach bum is good.
I'm not going to listen to anything else though because I'm a pretty busy person, and I don't like the way your advertising, but good job.
People saying that they can't hear Odd Future rapping over your songs shouldn't be taken as an insult. All of the best songs I've heard would be shit if ANYBODY tried to rap over them.
Uhhh, not saying that you're really good, but I do like beach bum, and I think it's best without odd future rapping over it.
If you could develop a style off that, get rid of this dark hype shit, and maybe add more progression, and less beat repeat I think you could make some really sick stuff. But of course that's just my opinion on what you could do to make the experience better for me.

Hope that means something.

I find it a bit ironic that you said you don't have time, yet you wrote a decent paragraph, and have 513 posts.

[chrisb]

I find it a bit ironic that you said you don't have time, yet you wrote a decent paragraph, and have 513 posts.

Songs take like 2 minutes each, atleast.
I have time to write, I don't have time to listen.
Because I listen while I write, and what I write about isn't what I listen.