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#1 tgarl666

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Posted 21 June 2011 - 06:45 AM

Yeah not trying to put anyone down, but a lot of the stuff I'm seeing here isn't very good..
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Posted 21 June 2011 - 06:47 AM

o the ironing
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Posted 21 June 2011 - 07:10 AM

That was an awful beat. Lasted like 10 seconds.
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Posted 21 June 2011 - 07:14 AM

That was an awful beat. Lasted like 10 seconds.


Didn't make the beat so I'm not offended
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Posted 21 June 2011 - 07:15 AM

so why claim you make good music :thurnis:
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Posted 21 June 2011 - 07:17 AM

so why claim you make good music :thurnis:


Because the quality of our recordings and lyrics are greater than most of the other stuff posted here?
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Posted 21 June 2011 - 07:17 AM

Because the quality of our recordings and lyrics are greater than most of the other stuff posted here?

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Posted 21 June 2011 - 07:37 AM

Because the quality of our recordings and lyrics are greater than most of the other stuff posted here?


Have you never heard of the Polar Crew?
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Posted 21 June 2011 - 07:42 AM

I did say most, not all. But if I were to be honest I would say my dude Mobius is better than anyone in the Polar Crew
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Posted 21 June 2011 - 07:52 AM

I'm trying to tread lightly here because i really don't want to come across as an asshole but you did ask what we think. To be honest this sounds like a kinda lame attempt at having an Odd Future sound/in your face type attitude and it comes across as just that. Doesn't sound original at all to me. Aside from the overall sound of the song I also think you should work on your flow a little bit, it came across sounding forced, like you were trying to fit as many words in each line as you could without regard to the overall message. I appreciate the balls it takes to post your music online and get some feedback on it and hopefully this doesn't make you get defensive in any way, just trying to help you out a bit.
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Posted 21 June 2011 - 07:53 AM

o the ironing



RE: The music: I wonder what you sounded like before you heard OF? It's good to have confidence in your music, but don't go around saying that your crap music is any better than any of the other self produced crap that's been posted here..You end up sounding like a dick...who makes crap music..That's my opinion..No one DARES to be different..Be YOU..ODD FUTURE has already been done..Why not get on some new shit...I.e. SpeakZ, KiloKish, Vince Staples, Smash Simmons, etc..

Really? Ironing?...You're joking right?

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Posted 21 June 2011 - 07:54 AM

Because the quality of our recordings and lyrics are greater than most of the other stuff posted here?


Anyone can buy quality. Fuck you and your friends. You all suck, go play tag with killer whales.
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#13 tgarl666

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Posted 21 June 2011 - 07:55 AM

I'm trying to tread lightly here because i really don't want to come across as an asshole but you did ask what we think. To be honest this sounds like a kinda lame attempt at having an Odd Future sound/in your face type attitude and it comes across as just that. Doesn't sound original at all to me. Aside from the overall sound of the song I also think you should work on your flow a little bit, it came across sounding forced, like you were trying to fit as many words in each line as you could without regard to the overall message. I appreciate the balls it takes to post your music online and get some feedback on it and hopefully this doesn't make you get defensive in any way, just trying to help you out a bit.


Yeah I'm not going to get defensive when someone actually posts something that makes sense and is thought out. Perhaps you'll listen to some of my other songs on my facebook page and let me know if you get the same vibe. Thanks for judging on an intelligent level.
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Posted 21 June 2011 - 08:02 AM

Yeah not trying to put anyone down, but a lot of the stuff I'm seeing here isn't very good..


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Posted 21 June 2011 - 08:02 AM

Yeah I'm not going to get defensive when someone actually posts something that makes sense and is thought out. Perhaps you'll listen to some of my other songs on my facebook page and let me know if you get the same vibe. Thanks for judging on an intelligent level.

I've listened to a couple of your other songs and honestly I just feel like I'm listening to a group of Odd Future fans who were inspired by them and decided to rap like them. I'm not saying there's anything wrong with that but I know when i listen to music I want to hear something original and listening to just a few of your songs i feel bored because it just seems like a not as good version of some of OF's earlier stuff. It's fine to be motivated by some of your favorite artists but i recommend forming your own sound that isn't so similar to them because if it stays this similar you're going to be written off as trying to ride OF's coat-tails. Of course this advice is really only relevant if you have some sort of interest in making a career out of music, if you're just doing it for shits and giggles then who gives a fuck
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Posted 21 June 2011 - 08:04 AM

You don't come on a forum talking about how great you are and how bad everyone else is. the fuck
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Posted 21 June 2011 - 08:04 AM

Eh was okay
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Posted 21 June 2011 - 08:07 AM

here's a non odd future "inspired" song
and it's also newer than the other song I posted

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Posted 21 June 2011 - 08:10 AM

A few things.
He meant ironing. People say that. It's a joke or something.

Another thing. "I actually make good music" Is a bad way to start a thread. If you're making music you'll probably think it's good, most people on here do. So when you say yours is good and most other peoples on here isn't... Wow. That's pretty lame.

As for the song.
The beat is shit. I understand you didn't make it, but you shouldn't rap over anything like that. Nobody should. All the random notes doesn't sound "cool", or "creepy", or anything like that. It sounds stupid. And all the volume changes, or panning or whatever the fuck that is, is fucking retarded. It sounds like a 10 year old thinking he's a Dj by messing with the volume on one of his favorite songs.
I also wouldn't call this "making music" I'd call it... Writing lyrics, or rapping or something else like that. Making music implies you make music. Like the guy who made your beat, except not. At all.
For the rapping. I didn't like it. I have a very low expectation for rap music, and I'm usually still let down. I listen to very little rappers because the majority of them are all the same to me.

I didn't like this. I didn't like the way you presented this, and as for right now I don't have much respect for you.
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#20 tgarl666

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Posted 21 June 2011 - 08:12 AM

A few things.
He meant ironing. People say that. It's a joke or something.

Another thing. "I actually make good music" Is a bad way to start a thread. If you're making music you'll probably think it's good, most people on here do. So when you say yours is good and most other peoples on here isn't... Wow. That's pretty lame.

As for the song.
The beat is shit. I understand you didn't make it, but you shouldn't rap over anything like that. Nobody should. All the random notes doesn't sound "cool", or "creepy", or anything like that. It sounds stupid. And all the volume changes, or panning or whatever the fuck that is, is fucking retarded. It sounds like a 10 year old thinking he's a Dj be messing with the volume on one of his favorite songs.
I also wouldn't call this "making music" I'd call it... Writing lyrics, or rapping or something else like that. Making music implies you make music. Like the guy who made your beat, except not. At all.
For the rapping. I didn't like it. I have a very low standard for rap music, and I'm usually still let down. I listen to very little rappers because the majority of them are all the same to me.

I didn't like this. I didn't like the way you presented this, and as for right now I don't have much respect for you.


Well the plan was to write something to catch everyone's attention, not to post something like "oh look at my music." Controversy is a good way to get someone's attention; just look at the artists for whom this forum is made for
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Posted 21 June 2011 - 08:15 AM

i knew what it was dumbfuck



Hence the question if you were joking? Did you not read the post? No need for insults..

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RE: The Music

The second beat was better, and maybe that song is old, maybe it's an Ohio thing, but lay off that voice effect..It was hard to listen to and I stopped after 1:30 or so..Also, relax, smoke a joint, get some head, set up the studio so its dark, but RELAX..feel the music..You sound uptight and that , in turn, makes you sound offbeat..Keep trying and don't quit is the best advice I can give, but be yourself...

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Posted 21 June 2011 - 08:15 AM

Well the plan was to write something to catch everyone's attention, not to post something like "oh look at my music." Controversy is a good way to get someone's attention; just look at the artists for whom this forum is made for

"Hey guys, great way to start off peoples opinions of you. Make them think you're some sort of egotistical douche".
Just listened to the second one. Auto tune? Are you fucking kidding me? I tried being rational with the first comment, but do you actually believe this sounds good? Any of it?
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Posted 21 June 2011 - 08:16 AM

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#24 tgarl666

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Posted 21 June 2011 - 08:21 AM

Hence the question if you were joking? Did you not read the post? No need for insults..

'Never argue with an idiot, they'll knock you down to their level, and defeat you with experience' -Mark Twain

RE: The Music

The second beat was better, and maybe that song is old, maybe it's an Ohio thing, but lay off that voice effect..It was hard to listen to and I stopped after 1:30 or so..Also, relax, smoke a joint, get some head, set up the studio so its dark, but RELAX..feel the music..You sound uptight and that , in turn, makes you sound offbeat..Keep trying and don't quit is the best advice I can give, but be yourself...

Oh the Iron Man,
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Thanks for the constructive criticism my friend, I do appreciated it. But yeah, I mean if I don't think I'm good why will anyone else? I'm working on my first album that's coming out in October which will be all original beats and even better than any song I have posted so far. When it comes out I can't wait to see what will be said by the 100 haters and 5 supporter that I will gain from this thread.
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Posted 21 June 2011 - 11:20 AM

Anyone can buy quality. Fuck you and your friends. You all suck, go play tag with killer whales.

Dude, I don't think you'd survive that! What an awful suggestion!
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Posted 21 June 2011 - 05:26 PM

dug his Own grave..
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Posted 21 June 2011 - 05:27 PM

I did say most, not all. But if I were to be honest I would say my dude Mobius is better than anyone in the Polar Crew


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Posted 21 June 2011 - 05:32 PM

By the way, your music is mediocre.
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Posted 21 June 2011 - 05:46 PM

"good music"
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Posted 21 June 2011 - 05:59 PM

idk why u come off as so arrogant thinking ur music is the shit, i personaly dont think its that good, btw wtf was that shit with the auto tune. ive seen much better artists on this forum like odyssey is the shit i downloaded his new mixtape its amazing... look him up on this forum "odyssey"
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