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jus because i made fun of white womann on twitter

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Posted 13 March 2014 - 12:26 AM

This is some gay ass shit I'm writing. Its heavily based on my life and every person in this is based on a real person. Im going to release a soundtrack to it vry soon :)

 

Releasing the first part very soon also. Stay Tuned no Young Clutch :dance:


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Posted 13 March 2014 - 12:27 AM

I like looking down at the floor. I prefer looking down at the floor rather than making direct eye contact at people. I'm not jealous of the floor. I don't envy the floor's social skills.The floor is like like me, it gets stepped on. Of course I don't literally get stepped on (besides the time I fell in gym during a class race) but I play a very small part in the world. We all do. Most of us aren't important, it may sound negative but it's true. I feel like I'm getting stepped on when I see other people with wack ass ideas reaching farther success than I ever will.

 

 

-Interrupted from thoughts-

 

"Yo Eric" Dave (my best friend) yells from down the hall. He catches up to me with one headphone in his ear listening to So Thirsty by Lil B. "Wassup Dave" I reply as I dap him.

 

"You trying to come over tonight bruh bruh, we're gonna have hella people over. Lily is coming over and we all know you're in love with her nigga. You should come" "Im not really sure Dave, if everything is cool at home I'll slide through. My mom was pissed at me this morning and put me on 2 week punishment but she usually forgets about that if she was just mad, if I'm not grounded I'll come." 
 

"Alright cool, you seen that nigga Marcus though? I need him to help beat the mission on Grand Theft Auto where you have to torture that dude. I can't play it in full I always end up quitting the mission once the tooth pulling shit starts." "Dave, you a pussy ass nigga. Here come this nigga right now though" 

 

Marcus was sort of different from us. Different in a good way. We were all good kids with bad intentions. Marcus was different. He was just a good kid. He went to church on Thursday and Sunday. He did his homework as soon as he got home. He smiled at everyone. He's just a good person. We clown him a lot for it, being a good person when you're young is weird.

 

"Hey guys wassup" "Whatup Marcus" we say in unison. "You guys wanna come to my bible study tonight? We're having cookies" (Funny side note we first met Marcus when we wrote "FUCK JESUS 666 FREE EARL" on his trapper keeper) "Why you always inviting us to that shit?" I agree with Dave but I don't say anything. "Fine, you guys have fun smoking dope all night" "No one calls it "dope" Marcus, we call it Pot". I don't smoke at all. Neither did Dave until recently but he smokes daily now. I don't mind, I've been around weed all my life. It's just not something that captures my interest.

 

We start down the hallway where we meet up with the other members of our little group of fuck ups that formed naturally. Tyler Francis and Vic. We're walking down the halls singing Lil B lyrics obnoxiously loud "10 K SUMMER 10 K SUMMER FUCKING 10 BITCHES IN THE BACK OF THE HUMMER". Even Marcus is singing along, we all love Lil B. 

 

After our next class we meet up again to start the same routine. Dave sees his girl, Sarah who was Tyler's girl up into a few months ago while Lily (who I want to be my girl) was Dave's girl. Its a fucked situation. Anyways Dave and Sarah meet in the middle of the hall and kiss. Dave greets her goodbye and walks back to us. "I fucked her in the mouth and you just kissed her" Tyler taunts. Dave replies with a joke about his mother. Neither were true. The day goes on, we do the same thing again after every class. Meet up and act obnoxious in the hallway.

 

 

After the day ends I put my headphones in and start playing The Crawl by Childish Gambino. That song is so amazing every time I play it. Its like a new album. I walk home.


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#3 Tubo Sensei

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Posted 13 March 2014 - 12:38 AM

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Posted 13 March 2014 - 12:39 AM

From what I know, we gone :eat:


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Posted 13 March 2014 - 12:45 AM

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Posted 13 March 2014 - 01:01 AM

Followed, put each Part # in each post for future readings :eat2:


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Posted 13 March 2014 - 01:21 AM

Sort of copying Gambino with the story + album soundtrack but whatever. Stoked to see where this goes and to hear the soundtrack :)
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Posted 13 March 2014 - 01:22 AM

Sort of copying Gambino with the story + album soundtrack but whatever. Stoked to see where this goes and to hear the soundtrack :)

Its not an album.


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Posted 13 March 2014 - 01:23 AM

Lookin forward to more parts of this and this soundtrack
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Posted 13 March 2014 - 01:24 AM

Its not an album.


Oh my mistake then
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Posted 13 March 2014 - 01:41 AM

Trying to crush Yung Faizons's dreams <_<


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Posted 15 March 2014 - 03:01 PM

PART # 2


I don't know why I describe myself as numb. Its not like I'm actually numb. If you kick me in the nuts I'm gonna feel it. Maybe I should call myself "emotionless" but thats not as catchy. I'm not emotionless either, I'm sort of a bitch. I'm in a weird space where I don't show any excitement or any strong feeling in general about anything. It's been like this for weeks. I have family, I love my family. I have friends, I love my friends. I wanna stomp them out daily but those are my niggas.

-Just as I'm writing that my friend Tyler comes and slaps the notebook out of my hand"

"WHAT YOU WRITING FAGGOT?" He says tauntingly

"A letter to your mom" I reply (His mom is in jail)

He tries to think of a reply but he can't so he changes the subject

"I saw you finally made it out to a party"

"Yeah, my mom wasn't tripping so I came"

"You hook up with Lily?" He says punching me playfully on the shoulder

"Nah, nothing happened"

"You were in Dave's room with her for like an hour, what do you mean nothing happened?"

Ok something did happen. I just didn't feel like telling Tyler or anyone so I guess I tell this journal. Last night I came to Dave's party with full intents of spending the whole time with Lily. When I came in she looked even better than she normally does. She had her hair up in a bun (I don't know why but I've always had a thing for that) and she was wearing an H&M flannel with some black pants (That fit perfectly, good lawd) and some Jordan 1s. She looked perfect.

When I first came in I dapped everyone and said hello but slowly made my way to Lily who was standing in the corner with her hands in her pockets. Weird because she's not one of them shy girls she's popular as Michael Jackson in our school. "Wassup Lily" I say trying to sound like I'm not flirting. "Hey Eric, I almost thought you wouldn't come". "You know me. I always come when you least expect it" "You're such a cornball" She says in a slight chuckle. Some slow song comes on (Dave is trying to smash Sarah, thats the only reason why its on the playlist interrupting all the Chief Keef and Future) I don't know what the song is but I still ask Lily to dance. Im gonna skip the awkward dancing part and fast forward to us being in Dave's room kissing. She's kissing on my neck. I know where this is headed. I grab her tit while sucking faces. This isn't the first time I've felt a tit but this is the first time it felt so amazing. I've been waiting for this since 4th grade. I know where this is headed. Well maybe I didn't because all of a sudden she pushes me away and starts crying. You know how I've been obsessed with Lily for years, well she's been obsessed with Dave for years. They even dated for a few weeks but he left her for Sarah who at the time was dating Tyler. "Whats wrong" I ask squatting down to her aid.

"My first time was supposed to be with Dave"

Oh my god I hate dave so fucking much.

"Dave doesn't even care about you, why would you wanna do it with him?"

She cries more. I'm bad at this.

"I don't know what it is about him, I cant get over him"

Dave pounds on the door right as she says this "ERIC ARE YOU DONE FUCKING LILY? ME AND SARAH NEED TO GET IN HERE" He says. Everybody laughs. Lily cries more.

"Fuck you" I bark.

"You're right" Lily says in a defeated whisper

"I should go, thanks Eric" she says hugging me

Thats how I end the night, a hug. I'm only 13 so I'm not worried about being a virgin forever, I'm not even in a hurry but if you got that close with the girl who you're obsessed with tell me you wouldn't be bummed out.

Lily goes out through the backdoor, I reenter the party.

Thats the night.
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Posted 15 March 2014 - 03:20 PM

I like looking down at the floor. I prefer looking down at the floor rather than making direct eye contact at people. I'm not jealous of the floor. I don't envy the floor's social skills.The floor is like like me, it gets stepped on. Of course I don't literally get stepped on (besides the time I fell in gym during a class race) but I play a very small part in the world. We all do. Most of us aren't important, it may sound negative but it's true. I feel like I'm getting stepped on when I see other people with wack ass ideas reaching farther success than I ever will.

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Posted 15 March 2014 - 03:20 PM

wonderful

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Posted 15 March 2014 - 04:43 PM

I'm in a weird space where I don't show any excitement or any strong feeling in general about anything. It's been like this for weeks. I have family, I love my family. I have friends, I love my friends.

Pretty much exactly how i feel. Good job :)
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Posted 16 March 2014 - 09:43 PM

Lots of potential with your characters, ty. Can't wait for the next part.


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Posted 16 March 2014 - 09:48 PM

Highlights of Part #2

PART # 2


I don't know why I describe myself as numb. Its not like I'm actually numb. If you kick me in the nuts I'm gonna feel it. Maybe I should call myself "emotionless" but thats not as catchy. I'm not emotionless either, I'm sort of a bitch. I'm in a weird space where I don't show any excitement or any strong feeling in general about anything. It's been like this for weeks. I have family, I love my family. I have friends, I love my friends.
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 She's kissing on my neck. I know where this is headed. I grab her tit while sucking faces. This isn't the first time I've felt a tit but this is the first time it felt so amazing.

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"My first time was supposed to be with Dave"

Oh my god I hate dave so fucking much.
 


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Posted 16 March 2014 - 10:06 PM

Lots of potential with your characters, ty. Can't wait for the next part.

Thanks bruh bruh :)
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Posted 17 March 2014 - 02:26 AM

Sort of copying Gambino with the story + album soundtrack but whatever. Stoked to see where this goes and to hear the soundtrack :)

 

Implying Gambino coined this idea all alone and no one else can ever do it or has done it without it being a copy. 


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Posted 17 March 2014 - 02:28 AM

This is really good though Ty, you have good character interactions so far, and emotional expressions as well. Look forward to seeing this evolve even more. 


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This is really good though Ty, you have good character interactions so far, and emotional expressions as well. Look forward to seeing this evolve even more.

thanks ambe <3
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Posted 17 March 2014 - 02:53 AM

Implying Gambino coined this idea all alone and no one else can ever do it or has done it without it being a copy.

Nah. If you want to write a story with a soundtrack, go ahead. It's just the way he describes the floor and being emotionless reminds me of how Gambino wrote his. You can't deny a Gambino influence, thats all i meant.
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Posted 17 March 2014 - 03:10 AM

Nah. If you want to write a story with a soundtrack, go ahead. It's just the way he describes the floor and being emotionless reminds me of how Gambino wrote his. You can't deny a Gambino influence, thats all i meant.

 

Well I said what I said because you didnt say the story itself, but the concept of it being "story + album soundtrack". 


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Posted 17 March 2014 - 03:19 AM

Well I said what I said because you didnt say the story itself, but the concept of it being "story + album soundtrack".

Oh, I get what you mean now. He is influenced by Gambino though. I highly doubt he would be writing this story if Gambino never wrote his
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Posted 17 March 2014 - 03:23 AM

Oh, I get what you mean now. He is influenced by Gambino though. I highly doubt he would be writing this story if Gambino never wrote his

 

You never know, maybe he would have, maybe he wouldnt have. 


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PART #3 

 

numb (nŭm) - adjective

1. Deprived of the power to feel or move normally
2. Emotionally unresponsive; indifferent
 
They say numbness can be due to the cold. Maybe this is why I feel the way I do. The way that Lily has given me the cold shoulder tonight might be one of the reasons I feel so numb. Or maybe it is the lack of daps.
 
"Hey faggot fag boy faggot bitch" Tyler yells.
My mind slips as I am walking downstairs back to the party. I sort of forgot I was there in the first place. Seeing Lily cry in the room put me into another (shower) mindstate, one that was even numbererererer than before.
I circle the room ensuring I dap each and every one of them. Until I reach Dave. He was standing there eating Sarah's face off to Samuel Truth's After Ours EP now available on Bandcamp.
I reach out to dap him but this time I lift my arm. I dap his face with my fist.
 
He fell to the floor, I could see his tears and I felt my genitals start to become engorged. The tears mixed with the blood leaking from his nose created a milky red colour that I hadn't seen before. It ignited something inside of me, something exciting. I leaned over Dave as he stared back at me with soulless frightened eyes. I moved forward and pressed my face against his. I licked his face gently and tasted the salty mixture on my tongue. There was something surprisingly sweet about his tears and I found myself becoming more aroused by the thought of ingesting Dave's fluids. 
 
"You like daps fag?" I whisper into Dave's ear.
 
Meanwhile everyone in the room is just staring, Sarah and Lily are holding each other in the corner with a look of terror in their eyes. Their breasts are pushed together and they look like a 4 titted abomination. I do not register the rest of their face as they are women.
 
I look back at Dave, he is frozen in place. Now he can understand the cold. He can feel how I feel. He can be NUMB.
I pull down Dave's Fubu 3/4 pants and release his black leviathan cock. I wrap my hand around the base but can only reach halfway around the diameter. This isn't the first time I've felt a cock but this is the first time it felt so amazing. I've been waiting for this since 4th grade. I know where this is headed. The room is quiet, all you can hear is the my lip smacks against the purple head. I dap his cock with my throat for what seems like an hour, I know he is scared but he can't resist the way I am treating him. His head falls back and he screams as I feel a strong gush of semen going down the back of my throat. I swallow it all.
 
We dap and I walk out. I throw a chair at the 4 titted woman before I leave.
 
Part 4 coming soon.

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Posted 21 March 2014 - 12:54 AM

 

PART #3 

 

numb (nŭm) - noun

1. Deprived of the power to feel or move normally
2. Emotionally unresponsive; indifferent
 
They say numbness can be due to the cold. Maybe this is why I feel the way I do. The way that Lily has given me the cold shoulder tonight might be one of the reasons I feel so numb. Or maybe it is the lack of daps.
 
"Hey faggot fag boy faggot bitch" Tyler yells.
My mind slips as I am walking downstairs back to the party. I sort of forgot I was there in the first place. Seeing Lily cry in the room put me into another (shower) mindstate, one that was even numbererererer than before.
I circle the room ensuring I dap each and every one of them. Until I reach Dave. He was standing there eating Sarah's face off to Samuel Truth's After Ours EP now available on Bandcamp.
I reach out to dap him but this time I lift my arm. I dap his face with my fist.
 
He fell to the floor, I could see his tears and I felt my genitals start to become engorged. The tears mixed with the blood leaking from his nose created a milky red colour that I hadn't seen before. It ignited something inside of me, something exciting. I leaned over Dave as he stared back at me with soulless frightened eyes. I moved forward and pressed my face against his. I licked his face gently and tasted the salty mixture on my tongue. There was something surprisingly sweet about his tears and I found myself becoming more aroused by the thought of ingesting Dave's fluids. 
 
"You like daps fag?" I whisper into Dave's ear.
 
Meanwhile everyone in the room is just staring, Sarah and Lily are holding each other in the corner with a look of terror in their eyes. Their breasts are pushed together and they look like a 4 titted abomination. I do not register the rest of their face as they are women.
 
I look back at Dave, he is frozen in place. Now he can understand the cold. He can feel how I feel. He can be NUMB.
I pull down Dave's Fubu 3/4 pants and release his black leviathan cock. I wrap my hand around the base but can only reach halfway around the diameter. This isn't the first time I've felt a cock but this is the first time it felt so amazing. I've been waiting for this since 4th grade. I know where this is headed. The room is quiet, all you can hear is the my lip smacks against the purple head. I dap his cock with my throat for what seems like an hour, I know he is scared but he can't resist the way I am treating him. His head falls back and he screams as I feel a strong gush of semen going down the back of my throat. I swallow it all.
 
We dap and I walk out. I throw a chair at the 4 titted woman before I leave.
 
Part 4 coming soon.

 

I got halfway through this before I realised this wasn't Ty 


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#30 milli

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Posted 21 March 2014 - 01:17 AM

"I pull down Dave's Fubu 3/4 pants and release his black leviathan cock"


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