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what happen

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if u follow me on twitter that aint shit compared to other things i said
its cancer season my guy was in his feelings das all it is
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i said its a lot of demonic elf looking white girls and my dude snapped

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prayers up for my nigga khaled until i die

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fuck this, enjoy the site. im changing my password to something i dont know and im not coming back

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oh shut the fuck up, i never got you banned, i never reported your dumb tweets i just blocked you

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really got me banned from twitter for 12 hours

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jus because i made fun of white womann on twitter

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to be*

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Because I was too wasted to make food and they were lying there from the morning

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Posted 21 March 2014 - 02:25 AM

Well I'm not sure how to follow up Sam's post but here is

 

PART #3

 

 

I realize how much of a pretentious fag I am. I'm truly aware I sound like an attention seeking faggot when I say "I'm not happy". I have all of this stuff to enjoy and I never enjoy any of it. Whenever I think about that I get even more "not happy". When I was younger I used to want to be a super hero. It's kind of a funny idea now because I'm not super I'm definitely not a hero. If I was a super hero I wonder what my super hero name would be. "Eric The Pretentious Not Happy Faggot Smith", that's actually kind of tight.

 

"Nigga why are you always writing in your notebook?" Vic says.

 

I know the answer to that question, I'm not interested in sitting in Francis's basement smoking weed and watching Fantasy Factory for 4 hours straight.

 

"I don't know, y'all niggas just boring" I say in a chuckle.

 

Vic is kind of interesting. He doesn't have any interest of his own. He smokes but only when the homies are smoking. He hoops but only when the homies are hooping. He skates but only when the homies are skating. I guess he's the opposite of interesting.

 

Vic starts to make a joke about how my mother doesn't find him boring until Marcus runs downstairs looking pissed. We usually don't see Marcus very often outside of school because he spends most of his free time with his XBL buddies.

 

"GUYS GUYS I GOT ROBBED, YOU GUYS GOTTA HELP ME!"

 

"Calm down Marcus, who robbed you?" Tyler says trying to calm Marcus down

 

"These people, I don't know them"

 

"What did they take?" Dave says in a voice that would imply that he finds it funny. 

 

"My Iphone and my wallet. I had 40 dollars I was gonna buy this really good headset today. I'm so pissed"

 

"Did they have a gun? If they had a gun we're not helping you" Francis cuts in.

 

"No they didn't, I think one of the girls may have had a knife but I'm not sure"

 

"Hold up nigga, you got robbed by some girls?" I say trying not to die of laughter

 

"Yeah, so?" He says even more irritated now,

 

We all laugh in unison.

 

"Yo this nigga was about to get faded by some girls" Dave says

 

"If I would have known he was this soft I could have robbed this nigga a long time ago" says Vic

 

"I'll send my sister to get his xbox" I say.

 

"Yo guys chill, lets help him. Where were these GIRLS who robbed you at?" says Dave even though he was just making fun of him.

 

"I was on 47th by the price chopper. They were sitting on the porch they always sit on so I'm guessing it was their house" Marcus says, he stills seems pissed at us for the roast session earlier.

 

"Lets get this niggas Iphone back" I say getting up and grabbing my Nike track jacket.

 

We walk to the house and you won't believe this. I was thinking it was some dyke hoes that robbed him. No it was these cute short white girls. I mean uggs and everything.

 

We walk up to the girls who are taking selfies on his Iphone 4S and drinking out of starbucks cups. I assume that was purchased with some of the $40 Marcus had mentioned earlier.

 

"Hey guys" I say putting on my deep sexy voice "My friend here says you stole his Iphone, I was just wondering if you could give it back. He's a good guy he doesn't deserve to be stolen from."

 

She looks up at me and smiles. This girl is kind of sexy. Her other friend not so much. I'll pass her to Tyler and Vic. "We were gonna sell it anyways. He can have it back" she says handing me the phone. She touches my pinky in the process. Everyone knows if a girl touches your pinky she wants the D. "Thanks" I say and flash her a smile :D .

 

"Whats going on?" a boy too young to be their dad but too old to be one of their boyfriends.

"THIS BITCH STOLE MY IPHONE" Marcus says pointing at the one I'm trying to talk to.

Marcus has to mess everything up doesn't he?

"Nigga calm down, you wasn't that tough when we weren't here" taunts Francis.

 

The boy takes all of the information in. "Why are you guys so mean? Wait until I tell mom"

 

Ah he's their brother

 

"Its fine" I say trying to make things better.

 

"No it's not, I'll make things better. Do you guys do drugs"

 

"What type of drugs?" Tyler says, he's intrigued.

 

"Come and see" the boy says .

 

We all enter the house. How did we go from getting our friends Iphone back from some girls to getting high with their brother in a matter of minutes. I guess that's just a normal day for us.

 

We enter what appears to be the boys room. The room is dark but it seems like a normal teenagers room. He seems a bit older than us. Maybe 15 or 16. We have a seat in his room, there are tons of CoD and Bikini Models posters on his wall. It reminds me of Jimmy from GTA V's room.

 

"I'm Webb by the way" he says

 

We all introduce ourselves. 

 

"Have any of you guys ever huffed spray paint?" he says pulling out a can.

 

"Nah" Francis says

 

"The fuck is your problem Webb?" Vic says

 

"Yeah, thats some white people shit right there." Dave says

 

"My mom says all drugs are equally bad" Marcus mumbles looking down at his feet.

 

"I had your mom rolling of a pill last night tho" I say

 

Tyler says nothing.

 

"So none of you guys wanna try"

 

"I do" Tyler says with a very serious face,

 

"DUDE" we all say in a nagging tone

 

He ignores us and walks towards Webb.

 

Webb shows him how to huff and he does a few times.

 

"Woah there, thats enough for a beginner" Webb says almost impressed

 

Tyler backs up with a dumb smile on face.

 

"Well we should get going" I say "It was nice meeting your family we should do this again sometime" I say walking out the door.

 

"What...was that?" "Why would you do that Tyler?"

 

"I'm down for anything man" He says in a rather calm voice, the stupid smile still hasn't left his face.

 

"How do you feel?"

 

"I feel fun man, I feel fun."

 

"Whatever, lets talk about how Marcus got robbed by Icarly" Vic says

 

We all jump on Marcus.

 

"You guys are dicks." he says

 

We walk back to Francis's house laughing. We all spend 2 more hours then until Marcus leaves.

 

"I have homework guys"

 

"Ight peace Marcus" Dave says

 

"Watch out for those girls man, we not helping you again" I say

 

I dap him. He leaves.

 

Tyler leaves left next as soon as the dumb smile left his face. Next Vic. Then Dave.

 

I fall asleep on the floor of his basement. I told my mom I was spending the night anyways. I walk home. It's funny how all of these stories end up with me walking home alone.


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Posted 21 March 2014 - 02:27 AM

 

PART #3 

 

numb (nŭm) - adjective

1. Deprived of the power to feel or move normally
2. Emotionally unresponsive; indifferent
 
They say numbness can be due to the cold. Maybe this is why I feel the way I do. The way that Lily has given me the cold shoulder tonight might be one of the reasons I feel so numb. Or maybe it is the lack of daps.
 
"Hey faggot fag boy faggot bitch" Tyler yells.
My mind slips as I am walking downstairs back to the party. I sort of forgot I was there in the first place. Seeing Lily cry in the room put me into another (shower) mindstate, one that was even numbererererer than before.
I circle the room ensuring I dap each and every one of them. Until I reach Dave. He was standing there eating Sarah's face off to Samuel Truth's After Ours EP now available on Bandcamp.
I reach out to dap him but this time I lift my arm. I dap his face with my fist.
 
He fell to the floor, I could see his tears and I felt my genitals start to become engorged. The tears mixed with the blood leaking from his nose created a milky red colour that I hadn't seen before. It ignited something inside of me, something exciting. I leaned over Dave as he stared back at me with soulless frightened eyes. I moved forward and pressed my face against his. I licked his face gently and tasted the salty mixture on my tongue. There was something surprisingly sweet about his tears and I found myself becoming more aroused by the thought of ingesting Dave's fluids. 
 
"You like daps fag?" I whisper into Dave's ear.
 
Meanwhile everyone in the room is just staring, Sarah and Lily are holding each other in the corner with a look of terror in their eyes. Their breasts are pushed together and they look like a 4 titted abomination. I do not register the rest of their face as they are women.
 
I look back at Dave, he is frozen in place. Now he can understand the cold. He can feel how I feel. He can be NUMB.
I pull down Dave's Fubu 3/4 pants and release his black leviathan cock. I wrap my hand around the base but can only reach halfway around the diameter. This isn't the first time I've felt a cock but this is the first time it felt so amazing. I've been waiting for this since 4th grade. I know where this is headed. The room is quiet, all you can hear is the my lip smacks against the purple head. I dap his cock with my throat for what seems like an hour, I know he is scared but he can't resist the way I am treating him. His head falls back and he screams as I feel a strong gush of semen going down the back of my throat. I swallow it all.
 
We dap and I walk out. I throw a chair at the 4 titted woman before I leave.
 
Part 4 coming soon.

 

I'm actually really glad you read the story well enough to write this. It reassures me I'm not doing this for nothing. Thanks fam, :daps: :et:


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Posted 21 March 2014 - 02:37 AM

Everyone knows if a girl touches your pinky she wants the D. 

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Oh, I get what you mean now. He is influenced by Gambino though. I highly doubt he would be writing this story if Gambino never wrote his

I actually haven't read bino's screenplay yet but I do admit I am influenced by Bino. This is very inspired by the music. Most of this stuff actually happened to me tho so similarities to Bino's play are not intentional.
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Theorom Wattstaxxx. Looks like shit smells like shit means like it will make you numb dfrom the face down.
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PART 4 :dance:


Being alone is sort of weird. I have a voice in my head. Not like I'm crazy or anything but ya know the normal voice in your head? I never really understood how I can hear the voice in my head when it has no actual volume. That's pretty amazing when you think about it. I only notice it when I'm alone and thats how I spent my weekend...alone. Then Monday comes. I usually don't have a problem with Monday or going to school but I do today because I'm gonna be forced to have an awkward interaction with Lily eventually. It shouldn't be that bad because I don't have her until 5th hour so I have all day to figure out how to not make it super awkward.

First hour is pretty boring. Its science class and everyone including the teacher is usually tired and not in the mood for science so a lot of our grade is how good our notes on Bill Nye are while the teacher sleeps at her desk. I sit by this kid named Reese. He's a nerd. He's one of those kids who comes to school smiling everyday even though he doesn't have anything to smile about. He's not one of those smart nerds either. He's one of those "What is he gonna do?" nerds. Anyways he sits down
"Wassup Eric" he says extending his fist out to me. I bump it even though bumping fist is an awkward exchange to me. "How was your weekend?" Reese asks like he genuinely cares and isn't just trying to make conversation.

"Fine." I say in a monotone voice a whole octave deeper than my natural voice. I'm annoyed by the question, why does he care?

"You catch the ball game?"

"No." I never watch sports. They're boring to me. I can't "watch" somebody do something. Id rather do it myself. Except for porn I guess but that's due to a lack of options.

Reese starts to say something but I stop him "Whats your problem, Reese?"

Reese is confused. "I'm not sure what you mean Eric, please be more specific."

"Thats what I'm talking about Reese, you never get mad, you never curse, you never get sad. You're always happy thats not normal. Especially for you. You have all the reason to be mad. You walk around getting disrespected constantly, dissed by girls and you only make average grades. What's your GPA?"

Silence

"WHATS YOUR GPA?"

"My grade point average is 2.7"

"Completely mediocre, you have nothing special going for you. Why are you always happy? How are you always happy?"

He looks up at me, he's not smiling. "How are you gonna tell me I have nothing to be happy about? I have a roof over my head with parents that love me and I have food to eat. Maybe it's not that I'm always happy maybe its that you're a whiny bitch who has know real reason to be walking around grouchy. There are people who would kill for your life and you're too much of a faggot to enjoy it. You have more luxuries than me. You have cool clothes, friends, you talk to girls who aren't teachers and they don't say mean things to you. You asked me why am I always happy? Well why the fuck are you always sad? You need to deal with your problems on your own instead of attacking me at random. Fuck you."

Damn, this nigga just ethered my whole life. The one time he retaliates and its against me. He's right too. Damn I need to say something before its too late.

"I didn't mean to attack you" I say lightly

Damn that was weak.

The bells rings as soon as I say that. "Whatever" Reese says getting up.
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Posted 12 April 2014 - 01:50 AM

your whole life just got ethered and thats all you could say? smh


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Posted 12 April 2014 - 02:21 AM

your whole life just got ethered and thats all you could say? smh

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we talking bout a whole-life ether here


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Posted 12 April 2014 - 03:59 AM

Well I enjoyed it. Pretty well written. Very good for a 13 year old chocolate boy.

 

A little confused on Part 4 tho. Reece sat down and said wassup at the beginning of the hour, but that conversation took the WHOLE HOUR and he was getting up to leave at the end? PLOT HOLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE


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Posted 12 April 2014 - 09:07 PM

Well I enjoyed it. Pretty well written. Very good for a 13 year old chocolate boy.
 
A little confused on Part 4 tho. Reece sat down and said wassup at the beginning of the hour, but that conversation took the WHOLE HOUR and he was getting up to leave at the end? PLOT HOLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

an hour is only 40 minutes and I just skipped most of the inbetween dialogue, lazy writing on my part :)
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Posted 19 May 2014 - 01:33 AM

almost as bad as henry krinkle


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Posted 20 May 2014 - 12:28 AM

Good writing, kept me entertained unlike some other stories i've read online. Reese is a deep mf


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Posted 20 May 2014 - 12:42 AM

still an enthralling read


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Posted 20 May 2014 - 12:49 AM

nice i never saw that last part its nice


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Posted 28 May 2014 - 01:47 AM

PART 5 #JUSTWAITONIT


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PART 5 #JUSTWAITONIT

I have just finished writing it
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Sorry for such long delay but shit with school got hectic and since summer started I haven't had much sit down and write time

Anyways here is #PART5#


P A R T 5

I managed to go all of the weekend and a whole school day without talking to Lily. I was prepared to go longer until I made the mistake of going with my boys to Sarah's house. It takes a certain type of lady to enjoy having foul mouthed, petty crime committing teenage boys in her house but Sarah's mom is one of those ladies. She always looked out for all of us from Francis to Marcus and we spend a lot of time in her house. She's been lonely since her husband died and her eldest son went to college in Nebraska so maybe she just enjoys feeling like she still has a family, even if they are foul mouthed, petty crime committing teenage boys.

"What's good" I say cheerfully walking into Sarah's living room where she and Dave are already sitting on the couch. Vic, Tyler, Francis, Marcus and our friend Cam who tagged along for some reason all follow taking seats on the floor. Bad Girls Club Chicago is on the TV but no one is paying attention. I'm only halfway listening to the conversation. "All I'm saying is I'd totally survive in jail, they just be overdoing that shit for TV, free meals, free shelter and no school. Sounds good to me, nigga I'd be cooling" "Shut yo soft ass up" Cam says without looking up from his phone, he never does. "Yeah you're a cute skinny Mexican boy and you're pretty. Your face just screams rape me in the shower" Sarah interrupts "Yeah I'd rape you" Francis says making a purposely perverted face. "You're a faggot" Tyler says shoving him. "You shouldn't say that, that's homophobic" Marcus says in a serious tone. "Its just a word Marky Marc chill out" I say reassuring him everything is fine which I have to do often. "Yeah I thought you Christians were supposed to hate faggots" "God loves everyone Tyler" Marcus replies sounding annoyed. Before Tyler could go on any further, trust me he would have there is a knock on the door. I'm closest to the door.

I answer it expecting another hoodlum from our school but instead it was Lily. "FUCK" I think in my head. I need to get this over with. Things are only gonna be awkward for a little. "Wassup Lily" I say avoiding hugging her. She greets everyone individually as she usually does then says "Eric can we speak in private?" "Aww shit, round 2" Dave says even though he was half asleep on the couch a minute ago. I flash him a dirty look, "For sure" I reply to Lily. I follow her to the kitchen "I know things got weird at the party on Saturday, I just hope things aren't awkward" "Yeah it's fine, don't sweat it, sweat is gross" she laughs "We're good as friends" WHY DID I SAY THAT AM I TRYING TO FRIEND ZONE MYSELF? IM SO DUMB "I agree" she says punching me playfully. It's official I'm friend zoned. I wanna stab myself in the foot with a dull butter knife. I fake a smile. "I'm gonna go back out there" she says. "I'll be out there in a minute" she leaves I curse at myself.
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Posted 08 June 2014 - 09:08 PM

nice i never saw that last part its nice

still an enthralling read

Good writing, kept me entertained unlike some other stories i've read online. Reese is a deep mf

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PART 5 #JUSTWAITONIT



Part 5 out now :D
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#50 Barakon

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Posted 09 June 2014 - 06:13 AM

I liked it, real entertaining.

BUT

Ima need it to be longer next time.
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Posted 11 June 2014 - 01:54 PM

Never read stuff like this but this is entertaining.


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Posted 22 July 2014 - 02:49 AM

Ty you should write a book bruh.


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#53 rhilo

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Posted 10 August 2014 - 10:33 PM

PART 6??? I know it can't end with the good ol friendzone
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