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get a hobby bro

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tfw you have no life so u hate tranny

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Bastard

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hi

@  Guest : (12:14 AM)

his woman beating pops beat the masculinity outta him rofl should hit him harder tho

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can you picture him in a dress makeup and lipstick bro fkn yuck. he was already ugly as shit and now he look like a car ran him over

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bro tfw adamy is a tranny now :suge:

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I was in love but FUCK IT

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OFM banging on yo mfn FM

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Tyler The creator presets

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oh shit dis not search lol

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kile kanvas

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Today marks 10 years ago that I joined the site

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metaldan online in the past 15 minutes :dog:

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I got locked out my discord account rip love yall :earl: :ronan: :tony:

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I still hold a lot of good memories here man. I’m happy it isn’t gone

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Still rip UGK

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I cant believe this is still up

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My account is almost 10 years old wtf.

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shoutout to you all

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amazed that this site still exists

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Anyways I think the albums pretty good definitively not better then igor or flower boy

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I guess im the first person to talk about (call me if you get lost) But that album was pretty good

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RIP ugk. Keep on keeping on people

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Fucking randomly came into my head today

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Good times

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Remember that dude that faked a whole bunch of art photos and got found out

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bro clockin in after so long, so much time has passed fr fr

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fig thats bad ok that represents the devil please post

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crazy how i can never post again since i have 6,066 posts

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im gonna start checking in daily ok. i see 50 members online in the last 15 minutes. No reason this place isnt lit

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Has anyone seen the new Tyler billboard he put up for his new album ¨Call me if you get lost¨ Hopefully thats the intro for his new album

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hi zebra

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i came on here and searched around today and its crazy that i remember everyones names. seriously idk if yall will remember me but i remember a lot of you. sm123 i still follow you on instagram

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hey guys

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Man, i havent been on this site in forever. im shocked its still up lol

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my account is a fucking decade old what the hell

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aye do yall fuck wit odd future

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I'm trying to find it.

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Does anyboody remember that video of the one black kid dressed just like tyler running around and dancing at a skate park?

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was gucci

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is there anyone here who can get me into my old account?

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@Jack haha

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seriously who's still paying for the hosting of this site just let it go away already hahaha

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wow i joined on the same day as tony

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i didnt pay for it though

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@chrisb access to premium threads

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i wna know....

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i never got i wna kmow

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what that get you actually tell me

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ahaa lol u premium

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wtf smd bitch

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im taller than chrisb

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This place been dead for years

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miss this shit, id come on here after school everyday.....

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Happy 10 for Yonkers.

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happy 10 year anniversary to yonkers

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hi

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i've been going through old threads and it's bringing me back, this place was such a huge part of my life, so weird and sad to see it like this now..

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ugk :(

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rip ugk

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yo

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holy shit hi everyone, it's so dead here now

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idk wtf I'm doing bruh

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holy shit people still use this? lol

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Feel free to PM me if you have any further questions or concerns about the Golf hoodie

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I am a 5"10 150lb male btw

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I'm not sure about the Golf hoodie sizing, but for Gildan hoodies I am a size large, however I prefer an XL-XXXL for comfort

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Hmm, I would say buy the brown one in regular small and just have it be a little big. Possibly room to grow into as well?

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I want to buy a Golf Hoodie there is a green or brown one. I want the brown one but the xs is sold out. In the green size there is xs. In the brown one there is small and i am a xs do you think I should just buy the green one or buy the brown one or just wait?

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hey i have a question

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black lives matter

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Lollll

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@Guest i have it

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Don't sell this forum Kevin

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Don't let this shit die

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bro wtf is going on, this shit doesn't work, didn't receive the validation email

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:jordancry: :jordancry: :jordancry: KTT died too

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Ayo anyone here?

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This shit is so dead

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Bro what's going on

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Imma show my kids these threads

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hope it always stays up

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Its been 8 years already fuck


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#1 Guest_Venereal_*

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Posted 29 April 2011 - 07:57 PM

I like to write and I love rap so naturally I like to craft verses. Every now and then I hear a beat that I can really feel and I'll take like 10 minutes to write something down to it and record it impromptu and hastily.



Here is one. Tell me if you like it and then posts yours if your into that type of shit too. Aitethxfaggot.
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#2 Zac

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Posted 29 April 2011 - 08:37 PM

Hahaha That was pretty swag

props man, good rhymes.
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#3 Babel

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Posted 29 April 2011 - 09:37 PM

yea, that was dope man. Nice flow.
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Posted 30 April 2011 - 11:10 AM

Thx
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#5 Coke&Cola

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Posted 30 April 2011 - 07:49 PM

that was sick, I just did something like this over that J Dilla beat, "Lightworks"

http://btwimgone.tum...598596/download
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Posted 30 April 2011 - 07:56 PM

I Have A Song By My Cousin.

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Posted 01 May 2011 - 09:41 AM



Here is a freestyle I just recorded. Using some beats posted in another thread from this forum.
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Posted 02 May 2011 - 02:34 AM

heres a freestyle of mine (i made the best) :



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Posted 02 May 2011 - 12:14 PM

wonder what this would sound like if you didn't try so hard to mimic earl's voice


I never once thought my voice even resembled Earl's... Earl is influential to myself though. Gotta love the pretentiousness of your comment though.

Btw in the written rap Pirate Eye you can hear my adjusting the pitch of my voice to match the beat with the "yo yo yo" in the beginning... That's not me trynna sound like fucking B-Rabbit.

But if your comment was complimenting mine and Earl's ability to match a beat with their voice masterfully then... uh... ty?
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Posted 02 May 2011 - 01:15 PM

wonder what this would sound like if you didn't try so hard to mimic earl's voice


This is true. Your emphasis on words and patterns is heaps like Earls.
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Posted 02 May 2011 - 01:43 PM

This is true. Your emphasis on words and patterns is heaps like Earls.


Wow gtfo? Fo realz? I definitely did not even notice that to be honest. I think of my flow as a cross between many many many MC styles and Earl is definitely on that list, maybe he is a little higher up the list then I originally thought though. Good shit
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Posted 02 May 2011 - 01:50 PM



Shout out to them niggas in philly holding weight like a bodybuilder.
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Posted 02 May 2011 - 08:11 PM

i write shit every now & then, but never actually record it, stuff in this topic's cool though
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Posted 03 May 2011 - 12:13 AM

Wow gtfo? Fo realz? I definitely did not even notice that to be honest. I think of my flow as a cross between many many many MC styles and Earl is definitely on that list, maybe he is a little higher up the list then I originally thought though. Good shit

I know you just hated on that dude, but I kinda agree with him. We've already hear odd future. Try being yourself.

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Posted 03 May 2011 - 10:35 AM

I know you just hated on that dude, but I kinda agree with him. We've already hear odd future. Try being yourself.

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I see where that's coming from but I can only tell you to pay closer attention to the lyrics... That is myself and once you get past the first glance I'm sure you'll see that it's an identity independent of OF.
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Posted 03 May 2011 - 10:36 AM



Maybe this one where I'm attacking subjects foreign to the sound of OF.
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#17 diD10

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Posted 03 May 2011 - 12:14 PM

Soo... You're a raper?
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Posted 03 May 2011 - 12:35 PM

Soo... You're a raper?


What the fuck? Am I a ghost dripping mahogany from blood too?

By being who I am I mean drawing inspiration from everything that moves me and using it to write coherent lyrics...




...Fuck



It's disgusting that someone actually has to intellectualize rapping about a topic similar to YOUR favorite rapper, how fucking pretentious of the audience here... The arrogance of assuming that nobody else out in the fucking world might have a background similar to them and therefor happens to have raps on similar subjects. Instead of focusing on what I do that is in common with OF, why don't you focus on the contrasting?

Real recognize real and I'm mad disappointed that OF has some fake ass fucking fans who just don't get it.
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#19 diD10

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Posted 03 May 2011 - 01:39 PM

What the fuck? Am I a ghost dripping mahogany from blood too?

By being who I am I mean drawing inspiration from everything that moves me and using it to write coherent lyrics...




...Fuck



It's disgusting that someone actually has to intellectualize rapping about a topic similar to YOUR favorite rapper, how fucking pretentious of the audience here... The arrogance of assuming that nobody else out in the fucking world might have a background similar to them and therefor happens to have raps on similar subjects. Instead of focusing on what I do that is in common with OF, why don't you focus on the contrasting?

Real recognize real and I'm mad disappointed that OF has some fake ass fucking fans who just don't get it.


Yo dude, I was joking, preferring to the topic name. I think you have great lyrics and a nice flow. Don't get so heated man.
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Posted 03 May 2011 - 01:46 PM

Yo dude, I was joking, preferring to the topic name. I think you have great lyrics and a nice flow. Don't get so heated man.


I must have misunderstood. My mistake


Edit: OHHHHHHHHhhhhhhh I know what you were saying now lmao. I put that into the title as a little pun and forgot all about it lol. I'm glad somebody caught that.
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Posted 04 May 2011 - 02:27 AM

Ok ok I agree with everything you just said, but that aside. If you want real constructive criticism mine would be to keep rapping your not their yet. Your flow is off and you sound monotone try humming out a flow that rides the beat perfectly and go from their do that 100 times an watch what happens.


You didn't think I rode the beat on my freestyle? That shit was off the top and I muuurrrrrdered that beat. Take another listen and listen carefully this time.

*another thing is on the website I got that beat from its in playlist format I thought I was done after the 1st beat. Then it autoplayed to the next one and I was like ohh thats the shit right here! hahahahahahahhahaha swag. just funny to me and shit.

**oh and for you smart ass niggas out there remember osama was on my mind. keep that in mind for the second verse... Hint Hint pay attention niggas class is in session**

***wait wait wtf actually on some weird ass negrodamus shit this was actually the nite before that?!? check the upload date... weird ass shit my niggas...***

****WTTFFFFFFFFFFFF THAT SHIT IS SO WEIRD!!!!****
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#22 Guest_SWAG666_*

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Posted 04 May 2011 - 03:13 AM

Venereal, It Seems Like You Can't Handle Criticism.
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Posted 04 May 2011 - 03:21 AM

I'll put on my big boy pants and try to eat some criticism... tomorrow.
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#24 ATKGWFO

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Posted 04 May 2011 - 04:22 AM

some kids i know i found it to be pretty good.
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Fuckwali, Shit Is Pretty Dope.
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Posted 04 May 2011 - 07:24 AM

He can't...... feel like I need to put things in perspective for you, so here.....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mxnsHk2-oXw

I know him and I know a couple of other rappers like him. He's not what you would call a hobbyist. Now you can either get better or stay in school


Ironically whoever that is could benefit from sitting down behind a desk in my class...

That said I think that video brings up another point, production value. It is true that I have very little formal production value.
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#27 jordanswe

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Posted 04 May 2011 - 10:38 AM

Yea kid's a friend of mind he has some pretty dope shit tbh.

Shit's so good, sounds a bit like Lupe Fiasco I reckon. Has he got any mixtapes out or anything?
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#28 BLAZE

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Posted 04 May 2011 - 10:47 AM

GTFO with that not trying to sound like Earl bullshit.
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Posted 05 May 2011 - 08:52 PM

GTFO with that not trying to sound like Earl bullshit.


Here's an idea Einstein, why don't you listen to one of the tracks NOT produced by OF? Or why don't you even listen to the freestyle to see how I flow in my most natural form, off the top with no preparation and with a beat I only heard for 2seconds before I spit on it. It's one thing to compare my flow to Earl but to say I'm trying to sound like him is laughable at best.
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#30 BLAZE

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Posted 05 May 2011 - 09:27 PM

You seem to have very high thoughts of yourself and your so called rapping skills... please just shut the fuck up.
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