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I guess im the first person to talk about (call me if you get lost) But that album was pretty good

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Has anyone seen the new Tyler billboard he put up for his new album ¨Call me if you get lost¨ Hopefully thats the intro for his new album

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#1 Twicks

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Posted 01 May 2011 - 12:16 PM

ok, so im a rapper. im only 15, im white, and im starting to work with producers and stuff but i want to spread my shit around u feel me? so yeah, if any1 has any of their music to post here, post it. (who knows man, maybe tyler will come by?) lol


heres some of my music :

im the 2nd one to rap in this 1 :



i got 1st in this 1 :





please tell me what u think.



i made both the beats, and its all copywriter



ohh and : OFWGKTA!
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#2 Zev Love

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Posted 01 May 2011 - 01:03 PM

I'd delete the first video if I were you. It wasn't very good to be honest. I really like the second on the other hand. You definitely have talent.

Also, chill on using words as "nigger". Seemed like you tried a little too hard to sound black :lol:
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Posted 01 May 2011 - 02:21 PM

You definately have potential man, and some pretty good flow, but it seems like your trying to hard. Your 15, and you have haters? Do they take your lunch at school?
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Posted 01 May 2011 - 04:03 PM

Yeah, I find it kind of lame that you've got sick cars, guns and hot chicks on the covers. It just shows everything rap is NOT good for these days man. Gotta switch it. I mean, look at OF. They have retardedly deformed children and shit in their art, and it clearly is working. Also all that stuff about haters and fans is just unnecessary for now.
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#5 Twicks

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Posted 01 May 2011 - 06:02 PM

i feel all of u, i think the 1st 1 is better then the 2nd 1, thats just me, maybe cuz i know the meaning, and i don't think i use nigger that much, its w.e :P, ty for ur feed back. check my youtube channel for more music.

http://www.youtube.c...u/2/ACNBPsRJ1Og
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Posted 01 May 2011 - 06:29 PM

That "Hey You" song was actually pretty alright, definitely have potential. But yeah, take all that flashy shit off. It makes you look just like the other million people doing the same ass clown shit. Just do something original. That pink floyd in the background was a good ass idea, more shit like that!
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Posted 02 May 2011 - 02:27 AM

That "Hey You" song was actually pretty alright, definitely have potential. But yeah, take all that flashy shit off. It makes you look just like the other million people doing the same ass clown shit. Just do something original. That pink floyd in the background was a good ass idea, more shit like that!


thank you man, ay i like what u guys are saying about the flashy shit, and the guns and girls and shit, i didn't make the album cover, this new producer im working with did, so ima run this by him, and tell him to switch this shit up. ty guys.
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#8 NikBates

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Posted 02 May 2011 - 07:51 PM

My SoundCloud

I make music too. Most of it is self produced. I think you guys would like some of my music in there. Check it out and let me know.

Who makes your beats? The drums sound kind of fruity loops sounding but it's alright. It sounds very very left brain influenced
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#9 NikBates

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Posted 02 May 2011 - 08:50 PM

Who's this direct towards? The OP?

Oh yeah, forgot to mention, I was talking to the original poster.


I like how chill your stuff is though, fuckwali. I like Empire, it sounds very polished. It makes me feel like I need to step my stuff up, but I remember my music isn't necessarily true hip-hop. But still, I really like Empire!
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Posted 02 May 2011 - 09:07 PM

check me out
http://musicfromsey.bandcamp.com
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#11 Twicks

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Posted 02 May 2011 - 09:32 PM

My SoundCloud

I make music too. Most of it is self produced. I think you guys would like some of my music in there. Check it out and let me know.

Who makes your beats? The drums sound kind of fruity loops sounding but it's alright. It sounds very very left brain influenced


i make all our beats. and its not at all i don't even know beats that left brain made... and nah, im actually using garage band :P (it dosnt have good drums....)
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#12 NikBates

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Posted 02 May 2011 - 09:37 PM

Thanks that's actually the only track up on the bandcamp out of the three that's technically completed. The other two are pretty much drafts, but everything should be out by the middle of this month....and yea we've got some pretty decent equipment and everything gets mix professionally so that's where the polish comes from. Funny how everyone seems to like empire, wonder if that'll change when the EP comes out....I listen to all of your shit just now too, and beat 56 is sick sounds like your still feeling everything out though (no homo) which is good.

Yeah man, it was pretty good. If you post it I'll get the finished product.

I'm glad to hear that, Beat 56 and Supernovas is a good representation of what about half my mixtape will be like.

I know there's a lot of different styles of music on my soundcloud, but the mixtape puts it all onto a context that makes sense. There will be 16 songs, and I got about 2 more songs to make. I'm just trying to finish a mixtape, so I have a collection of songs to give to people rather than trying to showcase individual songs on my soundcloud. Once that's finished, it's time to grind.

i make all our beats. and its not at all i don't even know beats that left brain made... and nah, im actually using garage band :P (it dosnt have good drums....)


The first song reminded me of a Mellowhype song, so I assumed Left produced it lol. And yeah, GB drums suck balls, but I've been able to make one decent song out of it. But I think you are kind of where I am at when it comes to music.
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Posted 02 May 2011 - 10:02 PM

When you dropped that tape I'd definitely be interested in hearing it....56 sounded like the type of shit I like listen too for fun flying lotusy lol....by when are you trying to have it done?


Let's see if I can get it out by June haha I'm busy as fck with school right now.

Maybe it could be on my birthday, June 30th. I think that would be cool.
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Posted 02 May 2011 - 10:02 PM

I'd delete the first video if I were you. It wasn't very good to be honest. I really like the second on the other hand. You definitely have talent.

Also, chill on using words as "nigger". Seemed like you tried a little too hard to sound black :lol:

Just don't say it if you're not black.

@OP, go get a nice mic, your production sounds pretty damn good for a bedroom artist.

I'd suggest a simple USB condenser. Then, learn to mix and master your own tracks so they sound professional, and distribute a real professional looking mixtape.
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Posted 02 May 2011 - 10:12 PM

Just don't say it if you're not black.


Real talk.
Especially if you're recording that shit
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Posted 02 May 2011 - 10:21 PM

Just don't say it if you're not black.


iight, i feel you but its kinda like a statement. like i can say anything i want. u feel me?
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Posted 02 May 2011 - 10:23 PM

The first song reminded me of a Mellowhype song, so I assumed Left produced it lol. And yeah, GB drums suck balls, but I've been able to make one decent song out of it. But I think you are kind of where I am at when it comes to music.


is that a complement?
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Posted 02 May 2011 - 10:40 PM

is that a complement?


I don't know? lol unless you are doing shows or something and have actual fans. I was really only talking about use of Garageband. But I recently for Reason 4.0 so I only use GB for recording.
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Posted 02 May 2011 - 11:58 PM

I don't know? lol unless you are doing shows or something and have actual fans. I was really only talking about use of Garageband. But I recently for Reason 4.0 so I only use GB for recording.


yeah i do shows, i have a hand full of fans. cuz of the shows, people be ilk "ohh thats twicks!" but i don't hear it more then like ones a month. lol
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Posted 03 May 2011 - 12:19 AM

Can you please take your songs out of your signature?
They take up space, and annoy the fuck out of me.

Hate the album artwork, didn't bother listening because my opinion is already so fixed.
I suggest writing a lot more, and practicing a lot more before putting yourself out there. You'll get fucking eaten alive. Maybe also wait until yoru voice gets lower. I've heard 14 and 15 year olds rap and it sounds so forced and terrible. You should be able to rap in your regular speaking tone.


Ps: I'd drop this cray z shit.
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Posted 03 May 2011 - 01:29 AM

Ps: I'd drop this cray z shit.


wait, y?
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Posted 03 May 2011 - 01:59 AM

Well, here goes nothing:

Spittin over Waka Flocka's TTG

Spttin over the Friday Instrumental


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Posted 03 May 2011 - 02:06 AM




Sorry for the double.
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Posted 03 May 2011 - 04:36 AM

wait, y?

I honestly hate it.
And your album artowrk.
And what I imagine your voice sounds like.

Read my post. Take it out of yoursignature.
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Posted 03 May 2011 - 04:38 AM




Sorry for the double.

I didn't listen to yours either for the same reasons of his.

Plus your second video has a picture of you taking a picture of yourself in the mirror. Which honestly I hate when people do that. It seems only emo's, women, and black men who try and dress like kanye west do that.
Don't have that on the video. You'll get fucking ate.


EDIT:

not actually bad.
Definetly not something I personally would listen to because I'm not into rap like that, but I bet any like T.I. or B.o.B fans might like it. You know, like mtv quality.

That's a compliment if you like that kinda shit, and if not... Then I guess it wasn't?
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Posted 03 May 2011 - 06:38 AM

Yeah beware guys, you will get ate up. But try and take it for what it's worth, which is a hell of a lot. I posted my very first music video, and it was criticized by a few members of NikeSkateBoarding.org. They picked on everything from volume levels, singing, flow, having awkward friends in the video, chewing gum, camera work, editing.

But, every little thing that they said made my music better. I feel like it is much more presentable now than it was a year ago when I made that video.

I need to step up my swag and start performing. I'm sure people would like what me and my friend could put together for live shows.
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Posted 03 May 2011 - 06:57 AM

You say 'nigga' a lot for a white kid. Somewhat to the point of annoyance. I agree that your album artwork needs much improvement. I did like the second beat though. You're on the tip of the iceberg. Keep it up.
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Posted 03 May 2011 - 10:29 AM

Well thank you for the compliments. And I don't give a fuck about the video itself, it's more about the song. The music is my main concern here, not if you like my pictures or not. And I'm far too deep into this rap shit to even let anything get to me. I'll definitely not get "ate up" although thanks for the warning. You can criticize, yeah. I know my songs are not top notch quality, and I know the videos are just picture shows. But you have to look past all of that and take the song for what it is at face value, amidst the other distractions. The funny part is I hate B.o.B. and I don't even listen to T.I. -_-
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Posted 03 May 2011 - 04:44 PM

I don't mean ate up exactly like people will bring you down, but people will nit pick and break down every single thing they find wrong for you.
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Posted 03 May 2011 - 10:02 PM

i personally think my shit is amazing. like. i hear my shit, and i compare it to other people that are trying to do the same thing im trying to do, and, idk i just feel like im way better. and im younger. like. im high right now, so im sorry for anything i say thats stupid but yo i feel like im just a fucking beast like period. specifically, lyrics, i think my lyrics r just fucking ridicules and it kinda gets me mad that some1 wouldn't listen to my music cuz of some art work some faggot producer made me and the fact the im young. that is not ok. and i don't think i say nigga a lot at all (i counted, i said it like ones each song) !!!!!!!!!!! and i don't say nigga just to say nigga i use nigga as a general term for people. like "those niggas" dosnt mean there black. it just means there niggas. ohh and i eat myself up (no homo) like, i nit and pick my own music. and i feel when people nit and pick my music they make up shit. like i don't get it. listen to my shit. listen to hey you, i say nigga ones in the into and never again. then a nigga wanna say i say nigga a lot wdf? how bout u tell me something that will make my music better? ill set u up with an example : add more bass. THATS GANNA HELP ME. not made up shit that just makes u sound stupid and degrades me.
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