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#61 Oddyssey

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Posted 08 May 2011 - 04:08 PM

i like the 2nd beat, work on your flow.


lmfaooo i got you man. i'ma try to say Nigger alot more in my songs, and kinda tone down the skill level alittle ;D
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#62 Oddyssey

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Posted 09 May 2011 - 12:03 AM

I listened to your tape all the way through, I'd say keep at it. Your almost there, right now your cramming a lot of words, try humming out a flow that rides the beat perfectly, and go from their do that 100 times an watch what happens.


Good lookin' out man, and that's actually what Ive been trying to work out lately!
Thanks for the advice!
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Posted 09 May 2011 - 12:42 AM

lmfaooo i got you man. i'ma try to say Nigger alot more in my songs, and kinda tone down the skill level alittle ;D


y would u put me in a predicament like this?

dog, u fucking suck. don't fuckin try me son, wdf is this suppose to be, a crack? i don't gatta defend myself in front of people who have no talent and wanna talk shit, it sounds like ur fucking rapping to a different beat, and ur lyrics suck prostitute dick. i don't say nigger a lot in raps, why the fuck are people making shit up? my producer, u no, cuz i have producers u fucking pussy, says its cuz of the image that i portray or some shit like that. basically, ur a fucking hater shut dat shit up b4 u start sumthin u didn't want nigga. nd don't bother posting back ur just make urself sound like more of a no life fuck ass no talent pussy nigga that is also retarded, and gay..... faggot.
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#64 Oddyssey

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Posted 09 May 2011 - 01:12 AM

y would u put me in a predicament like this?

dog, u fucking suck. don't fuckin try me son, wdf is this suppose to be, a crack? i don't gatta defend myself in front of people who have no talent and wanna talk shit, it sounds like ur fucking rapping to a different beat, and ur lyrics suck prostitute dick. i don't say nigger a lot in raps, why the fuck are people making shit up? my producer, u no, cuz i have producers u fucking pussy, says its cuz of the image that i portray or some shit like that. basically, ur a fucking hater shut dat shit up b4 u start sumthin u didn't want nigga. nd don't bother posting back ur just make urself sound like more of a no life fuck ass no talent pussy nigga that is also retarded, and gay..... faggot.


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Posted 09 May 2011 - 03:24 AM

tl;dr


i don't get it. see? u made urself look like what ever i said u would make ur self look like....
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Posted 09 May 2011 - 04:03 AM

i don't get it. see? u made urself look like what ever i said u would make ur self look like....


Twicks I was going to just like ease back on my criticism of you because of how new you were to this whole "rapping" thing but after that purely dick reply you gave Oddyssey I'll just be blunt: You're not good, not at all, and yes you do use "nigga" too much that's a definite turn off considering you aren't black and you sound like you might be the most white person on this forum, the album art is shit fire your graphic designer, and yeah I haven't gotten a chance to listen to Oddyssey yet (I will) but I'm going to go ahead and assume that he is 20x better than you [end rant]

But back to the thread Fuckwali (Bobby G.) you're good as hell you already know how much I like your music and to Jaysmoke your beats are pretty good I like them
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#67 Wavverton

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Posted 09 May 2011 - 07:17 PM

I write kinda indie/rock/pop which i would think most people here would not like, but i got signed to a small local label last month and i have a cd coming out soon

but here it is

My band camp
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#68 NikBates

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Posted 09 May 2011 - 07:32 PM

I made a new beat on my soundcloud, but I'm going to take out the melody and put in a sample, because the drums are too ill to pass up.

Listen on Soundcloud.com

It's beat 49
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#69 Bert

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Posted 10 May 2011 - 03:19 AM

This is my stuff i make beats and rhyme over my stuff, im thinking of making an album soon, not too sure yet though i gott aget a better mic, the ones i rhyme on are monsters, aliens, departure. well i rhyme on some other ones but im too lazy to name em,

here it is My soundcloud

i go by the name Bert.

soundcloud.com/bboykillbert
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Posted 14 May 2011 - 10:17 PM

Me and my boys made a new song, it's called "Stone Cold". Please check it out and tell me what you think!

http://hulkshare.com/cfqk630ptg6f
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Posted 14 May 2011 - 10:27 PM

y would u put me in a predicament like this?

dog, u fucking suck. don't fuckin try me son, wdf is this suppose to be, a crack? i don't gatta defend myself in front of people who have no talent and wanna talk shit, it sounds like ur fucking rapping to a different beat, and ur lyrics suck prostitute dick. i don't say nigger a lot in raps, why the fuck are people making shit up? my producer, u no, cuz i have producers u fucking pussy, says its cuz of the image that i portray or some shit like that. basically, ur a fucking hater shut dat shit up b4 u start sumthin u didn't want nigga. nd don't bother posting back ur just make urself sound like more of a no life fuck ass no talent pussy nigga that is also retarded, and gay..... faggot.


lol. You're 15 and not particularly good. I'm a nice guy so I wasn't going to say anything, but after seeing this respond (especially to someone who actually got talent) I decided to give you a reality check.

Oddyssey, your shit is tight!
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Posted 14 May 2011 - 11:20 PM

I write kinda indie/rock/pop which i would think most people here would not like, but i got signed to a small local label last month and i have a cd coming out soon

but here it is

My band camp


Your songwriting and vocal melodies are pretty good. There's some 90's in there for sure, not just cheap throwback sounding empty moaning over guitar strumming and too much god damned reverb. So you're standing a head above most other 'indie' musicians I've heard. The 'those voices in your head would...' line in Town Crazies has a nice melody. It's familiar in a good way. Really all three of those songs have good vocal melodies which is huge, so congrats. 'Hyprocrite' is probably my favorite. If I had to give a primary criticism it would be that they sound similar sonically. Your voice and the loud foreground guitar strumming I mean, I don't think those things can carry a whole album. If you mixed it up with different arrangements, more riffs(synth or otherwise), and some bass, it'd be much more interesting to me. Sonic diversity is what I'm getting at I guess. But I'm biased and I mostly hate acoustic guitar-strummy pop. So I guess it's a good sign that I even cared enough to type this. Second point, I feel like the kick drum is getting lost in the mix sometimes, and I'm not being hit with the snare like I want to be. But maybe that's not your focal point or these are just demos anyway.


Do you listen to Dinosaur Jr.? Or Camera Obscura? How about The Besties? I really recommend the last band, as far as melodic verses and catchy choruses go they're one of the best bands of the 00's in my opinion. You should find all the music you can that sounds similar to the vibe and feel of what you're trying to accomplish and learn all you can from it and I think you'll continue to make some pretty good music.

Also congrats getting on getting signed, make sure you pimp your album here when it's released. A friend of mine got signed to a small indie label recently as well, she's recording her album with Simone Felice of the Felice brothers. Not that that means shit to me but I'm still kinda jealous of the attention and musical validation.
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#73 FuckFaggots

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Posted 14 May 2011 - 11:27 PM

http://www.zshare.ne...087357b2ff3fc9/
leemme know if you like this.. i got more
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#74 The Illustrator

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Posted 14 May 2011 - 11:30 PM

Anyone mind letting me use their beats? I can spit but I suck dick at producing anything.
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#75 Wavverton

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Posted 15 May 2011 - 05:57 AM

Your songwriting and vocal melodies are pretty good. There's some 90's in there for sure, not just cheap throwback sounding empty moaning over guitar strumming and too much god damned reverb. So you're standing a head above most other 'indie' musicians I've heard. The 'those voices in your head would...' line in Town Crazies has a nice melody. It's familiar in a good way. Really all three of those songs have good vocal melodies which is huge, so congrats. 'Hyprocrite' is probably my favorite. If I had to give a primary criticism it would be that they sound similar sonically. Your voice and the loud foreground guitar strumming I mean, I don't think those things can carry a whole album. If you mixed it up with different arrangements, more riffs(synth or otherwise), and some bass, it'd be much more interesting to me. Sonic diversity is what I'm getting at I guess. But I'm biased and I mostly hate acoustic guitar-strummy pop. So I guess it's a good sign that I even cared enough to type this. Second point, I feel like the kick drum is getting lost in the mix sometimes, and I'm not being hit with the snare like I want to be. But maybe that's not your focal point or these are just demos anyway.


Do you listen to Dinosaur Jr.? Or Camera Obscura? How about The Besties? I really recommend the last band, as far as melodic verses and catchy choruses go they're one of the best bands of the 00's in my opinion. You should find all the music you can that sounds similar to the vibe and feel of what you're trying to accomplish and learn all you can from it and I think you'll continue to make some pretty good music.

Also congrats getting on getting signed, make sure you pimp your album here when it's released. A friend of mine got signed to a small indie label recently as well, she's recording her album with Simone Felice of the Felice brothers. Not that that means shit to me but I'm still kinda jealous of the attention and musical validation.


thanks man, really glad you like the tunes, im super excited for the album to come out, i am going to check out the besties first thing tomorrow

Also i love Dinosaur Jr
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#76 beenyce

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Posted 15 May 2011 - 02:23 PM

self proclaimed best artist on OFT http://soundcloud.com/beenyce
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Posted 15 May 2011 - 05:05 PM

ev4n holt ev4n holt


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Posted 15 May 2011 - 05:27 PM

last two posts were legit. check 'em out.

@beenyce Tellin' Me and Coming With Me have some great chords, great simple melodies. You do these beats or work with someone?
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#79 Frank Dank

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Posted 15 May 2011 - 06:57 PM

I'm 15 and white too. This is more on the comedy side than serious. I play piano more than I rap.

This is me playing the piano: The Saria's Song From that Ocarina Of Time game (2 years ago?)


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Posted 16 May 2011 - 12:48 AM

last two posts were legit. check 'em out.

@beenyce Tellin' Me and Coming With Me have some great chords, great simple melodies. You do these beats or work with someone?


thanks man appreciate it... I do most of the beats but Tellin Me was done by one of my boys

look out for our new shit B)
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